1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2018 11:26 pm Title: The closer I get to you
Another fanfic which seems to think Jim started at DM first. In the show they mention her warning Jim about Dwight on his first day.
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2010 02:57 pm Title: To the place where I belong
Wow! This was great! It turned out to be AU but in one of the best possible ways. I especially like how Jim and Pam can fight and no one think they're going to break up. That's a real relationship and you drew it perfectly. And the surprise wedding - excellent! Kudos!
Date: January 31, 2008 06:25 pm Title: So I'm going home
Cuteness!
Date: January 31, 2008 06:24 pm Title: Cause you might just get it all
This is the sweetest most fluffiest story!
Date: January 31, 2008 06:21 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
*happy sigh*
Date: January 31, 2008 05:37 pm Title: Feeling good don't ever cost a thing
Aww!! That "last first date" line was really sweet.
Date: January 31, 2008 05:30 pm Title: You always seem to give me another try
Aww, adorable!
Date: January 31, 2008 05:24 pm Title: The closer I get to you
LOL cute flashback.
Date: January 31, 2008 05:00 pm Title: I've not always been the best man or friend for you
Angry!Karen always makes me uncomfortable. Eeek.
Date: January 31, 2008 04:58 pm Title: I don't regret this life I chose for me
Aw, I do feel bad for Karen.
Date: January 31, 2008 04:57 pm Title: To the place where I belong
Starting a new one -- love Jim's moment of revelation.
Date: November 03, 2007 11:45 pm Title: So I'm going home
i love it!
9 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2007 12:42 pm Title: So I'm going home
Awww, what a sweet last chapter. I do hope that Pam and Jim fight and have a "normal" relationship on the show, and they don't just break them up. Anyway, great story all around - well done!!
Date: June 02, 2007 12:17 am Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Wow. I really liked how you had Pam lay it all out on the line. They both finally got what needed to be said out there. Hopefully this will pave the way to their happiness.
Date: June 02, 2007 12:12 am Title: I've not always been the best man or friend for you
Great story so far. Truth and honesty is what we finally need to get this togerther.
8 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2007 10:35 pm Title: So I'm going home
Fluff is required every once in awhile. There's a nice balance with reality in this final chapter. I like the idea of Pam and Jim eloping.
Date: June 01, 2007 07:52 pm Title: So I'm going home
Oh, very nice! I like your little list of fights, and Karen working at Staples, and of course "The Halperts"!
Date: June 01, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Wow! Lots of good discussion and air-clearing here! Ooh, and getting out of here... niiice.
Date: June 01, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Feeling good don't ever cost a thing
This is just lovely.
A box of chocolates seemed cliché. Hey, hey, hey! Never underestimate the importance and meaning of chocolates. Mmmm, chocolates! Sorry, what was the question?
I loved this line: "Tonight was a threshold that she thought she would never get to cross." I love this line "Suddenly he was on top of her, her face cradled in his hands, his lips on hers before she could react.", and it gives me the impression of Pam being this incredibly powerful magnet, like a supermagnet, and he's just... woosh... drawn against her. (Swoon.)
Date: June 01, 2007 06:47 pm Title: So I'm going home
I loved this story. Especially their wedding on the beach...if I had it to do again, mine would be just like that. You did a great job describing the scene, and I loved their one-line message to Phyllis. And the reasons for the fights were totally realistic too.
I went to school in Cincy and keep trying to imagine where Jim and Pam were, leaning against that iron fence. :D
Great job, agd300! Can't wait to see what you write for us next!
Date: June 01, 2007 06:41 pm Title: To the place where I belong
what a sweet ending! I can just imagine Michael tearing up at the end, he's a big softie really and has been advising Jim all along. It really is an endearing quality in Michael. I like that you included the fights too, it made the story seem more grounded than most Jam fluff, which made the ending all the more rewarding!
Date: June 01, 2007 01:02 pm Title: So I'm going home
Cute ending! Good job and thanks for sharing!
Date: May 31, 2007 07:34 am Title: To the place where I belong
Very nice update. I think everything that was said needed to be. Now they can move on and have some "fun"!!!
9 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 04:06 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
very well written with believable dialogue. - thanks
Date: May 28, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Feeling good don't ever cost a thing
I was SO giddy while reading this... it was great, really! I loved the part with Phyllis, and the camera guy--nice twist! I LOVED it! Keep writing!