10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 09:03 am Title: Chapter 12
I don't mean this as a criticism, as I love this story no matter what, but you repeated this line - "Pam….” His expression was so serious, so earnest. Then he smiled. “It sounds trite, I know, to say that I had a great time tonight, but really…”
I just wanted you to know. Once. (hee hee)
Author's Response: Oh my god - that last line of yours cracked me up! I almost choked on my lunch! THanks for the heads up!
Date: August 03, 2006 08:38 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm excited for the smut and the variation. Waiting is killing me. Oh, so impatient.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 08:33 am Title: Chapter 11
I love that you included a line from the song. "I need you so much closer.” I've loved that song for a long time, and that line just gets me. So simple, yet so poignant.
I think that you underestimate how awesome "What Happens Tomorrow" is. I read the whole thing and loved every moment of it. =] Keep these beautiful stories coming.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm changing this one a bit, so the next few chapters won't be identical.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 08:30 am Title: Chapter 12
I would just like to say that I made it to the end of Tomorrow and I loved it. I kind of skimmed this chapter because I could see it was about the same, but if someone hasn't read the other story, they would definitely be interested. I'll be glad to see this veer off in another direction, though! Still love it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 07:44 am Title: Chapter 11
Yeah, this chapter does seem at bit familiar. I loved What Happens Tomorrow.I love long multi-chapter fics that I stumble upon when they're finished. Hours and hours of fun!
Author's Response: I'm hoping that doesn't ruin it for anybody - did it bug you too much? I really had the impression that most people didn't make it to the end of What Happens Tomorrow because they lost interest. This one will still be a little different, at least.
8 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 07:15 am Title: Chapter 11
Good story. It was angsty but it really works for me. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 06:51 am Title: Chapter 9
Bravo Andrea! She's such a likeable character. I'm seriously addicted to this story.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 06:35 am Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter. I was so afraid Jim would run back to Andi. And poor Roy. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I am really loving this story.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 06:10 am Title: Chapter 10
PLease tell me you have another chapter already written. Seriously I need a reunion...STAT!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 05:36 am Title: Chapter 5
Great tension in this chapter. I'm a little surprised that Andrea didn't put 2 and 2 together when she heard Roy's name...later, maybe?
Date: August 03, 2006 03:56 am Title: Chapter 4
I actually like the Andrea character. I somehow feel that she won't want to stand in the way of Jim's true love, even though it'll hurt her. I'll just keep on reading to see how right I am...
Date: August 02, 2006 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
I (somehow) have only just found this story, so I thought I'd lump it all up and say that I love what you've done with the situation, how you've incorporated spoilers, and that it amazes me how much The Office relates to Hall and Oates. Never realized. Anyway, please keep it up! It's fantastic. Very realistic.
Date: August 02, 2006 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can totally see where Andrea is coming from, you know, on the wanting Jim front. What? I'm just saying...she's got good taste.
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yes, Jim, go to Pam. But wait, she's at Roy's. No Jim, don't go to Pam. Wait another day or two. Please, for the love of God, just wait! You're killing me.
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
Okay, just like you are this story's bitch, I am yours. You never cease to amaze me with your writing. It is just incredible. And oh my God, the angst is so much and so good and so painful. Ouch!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
ahh this is so good! I can't wait for more chapters :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
haha I actually made that fix you you tube video! crazy how inspired this chapter.
you're such a great writer!! I'm loving this fan fic!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Is it wrong that I kind of love Andi. You've written her so well. I love that she's not bitchy or clingy. But, strong and a realist. I love this story so much. I wonder how this whole mess is going to get cleared up.
9 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is some good angst! I love Andi; she is a great match for Jim. Now, Roy is back in the picture though. Oy! Can't wait to see where this is heading...
Date: August 02, 2006 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
You are evil. Of course once Jim's free of Andi, Pam's just slept with Roy.
I love it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was so good it made me want to cry, please tell me he won't find Pam in Roy's arms, this would be too much !
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
You're spoiling me with all these incredible updates!
Still loving this story and the way that you handled the fallout from Pam finding out. All the reactions seemed spot-on. But you're killing me, because the way they're acting in your story...I actually like Andi better than Pam and now I'm all sad :(
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great. PLEASE Tell me there is some reconciliation ahead for JAM. When can we expect chapter 10?
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
You're killing me... really... I mean it. Keep posting - I love procrastinating!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love, love, LOVE this chapter. I was wondering how you were going to handle Andi. You did it so well, I know she is hurt but she was so noble to do what she did. I felt badly for her (but not badly enough that I wanted them to stay together.) How in the world will they all work together now? Hope Ms. B. hasn't gotten in too deep with Roy...