Date: November 26, 2020 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really like your vision of Andrea. You moved her into a relationship with Jim organically and ended it with class.
1 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2019 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
The angst is perfectly awful here, but I want to highlight something else, the beauty of this line: "that suddenly, it occurred to him as he was holding her that he felt for the first time in months that he was home, where he belonged." Lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2009 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE THIS STORY! it's so in detail. you did a great job
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2009 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow. This story, especially the last chapter, is just amazing and written with so much beautiful detail. Keep up the superb work :)
9 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2009 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am impressed....great story.
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2008 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
Beautiful, beautiful story. Especially the last chapter... So much love... It had me go "aww" at least 100 times.
Author's Response:
I'm a bit late in responding to your review, but I wanted to thank you for taking the time to comment. :o) I must admit...this is one of my earlier fics, and I tended to be waaaaaaay melodramatic in the beginning, so sometimes I cringe when I look at older stuff. That said: It's nice to hear that you really did enjoy it. :o)
Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: December 10, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! This story is just amazing. I love that you made Andi such a three dimensional character. So perfect. I love how they figured everything out together and the last chapter was just amazing and perfect and wonderful. Such a good payback for all the previous angst!
(Oh, and totally not a big deal, but in the last chapter you said they were dancing to Train's "Love Will Come Through". The song is actually by Travis!)
Author's Response:
So here I am responding to your review nearly six months after the fact, but a discussion over on the Fanfic discussion thread reminded me that yes, I need to go back and respond to some older reviews! :o) I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed this story; it was one of my first fully fleshed out ones. I had such a great time writing Andi, because I really wanted to write a believable - and likeable - love interest for Jim, someone that we could not feel too horrible about him being with. And I had entirely too much fun with the whole Pam-doesn't-know thing. And thanks for the Train/Travis thing -- I totally knew that, must've been in a hurry. :O)
Thanks for reviewing (and BTW: Your screen name is awesome!) --
Date: June 26, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aaaaand, now you've got me crying. I watched the fanvid before reading this, was that my mistake? ;)
This is such a great chapter. Definitely not too high on the angst-o-meter. I could hear their voices through your writing - great job.
If only I "Andi" had ended up being so nice in real life. ;)
Author's Response:
I have to tell you - it really is such a thrill to read new reviews of an old work; this one was my first fully complete fanfic, so it's kind of a sentimental one for me. :o) ANd YES that video freaking kills me.
Heh, yes, Andi was long before we even knew who Karen was (though I did know that he'd have a love interest and that Rashida would be playing her).
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: June 26, 2007 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Ow. That really, really hurts.
Author's Response:
Ohhhh -- I'm sorry! Yeah, this one's quite angsty for the first half (and as I was posting, boy did some people give me the business, LOL). But I can promise you that there's a fairly long happy ending.
TWSS! *bursting out laughing a la Michael Scott*
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 16, 2007 12:29 am Title: Chapter 15
Not just smut, but girl7 smut which is some of the prettiest smut of all the smut. ;)
Where to start? So much to take in. Oh yeah, that was looooooong. (TWSS)
Just wonderful as usual. Such sweetness, pitch perfect bantering (how I love the bantering) the joking and the tickling (guh!) the tears (sometimes mine!). Snow Patrol, for fuck's sake! You're killing me with Snow Patrol, but in a good way.
There was a lot of kissing, and that makes us very happy. (That would be me and Smiley!Jim icon)
Wait! Halpert-Beesley-palooza?
Better. Than. Pancakes.
::bounce-bounce::
Author's Response:
Hee - glad you liked the smut! Hands down, I had the most fun writing the "rules" chapters -- so much fun. I'm really glad you liked all the kissing -- and of course, I totally aim to please Smiley!JIm icon. (I swear to god, I get a big old grin just thinking about it, hee.)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 31, 2007 07:16 am Title: Chapter 8
OH, my god. In the middle of all the angsty-great angst, the Even Finer Work Award.... too much! I love it.
Author's Response:
Hee - yeah, that's the only thing in this chapter that wasn't just over-the-top angsty. :o)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow. This is without a doubt the best fanfic I have ever, ever read. Completely amazing story. I bow to your awesomeness!
Date: February 01, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love, love, LOVE your internal monologue stuff. I must be a glutton for angst, cause I totally eat it up. Your writing is so visual and the characters' "voices" so perfect that I can see them literally in my head having these conflicts. Glad I found another winner!!
Date: January 31, 2007 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1
fyi, they dont sell alcohol in PA grocery stores. Just the state store or a lovely "beer barn". Loved the story though!
10 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2007 06:28 am Title: Chapter 15
This was the most amazing story I have ever read, EVER! You're incredible. You captured their characters perfectly, which is the hardest thing to do in a fanfiction. And, that love. All that love. You made it so real, it was heart-breaking, and beautiful. You had me laughing, and swooning, and crying. Thank you so much for that. Again, you're incredible. You're awesome.
Date: January 21, 2007 06:28 am Title: Chapter 15
This was the most amazing story I have ever read, EVER! You're incredible. You captured their characters perfectly, which is the hardest thing to do in a fanfiction. And, that love. All that love. You made it so real, it was heart-breaking, and beautiful. You had me laughing, and swooning, and crying. Thank you so much for that. Again, you're incredible. You're awesome.
Date: December 30, 2006 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yipee. Plaudits!
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2006 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
perfectly sad! really well done.
Date: November 20, 2006 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
AMAZING!
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh, I loved it!
It's VERY realistic; I could definitely see this truly happening. I loved how they took it slowly, and how it was hard for them to believe it was all true. Aah.
10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2006 09:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I am just tearing through everything you've written - and loving all of it!! Please continue. I need a happy ending; they need a happy ending! (though the angst is delicious)
Author's Response: OH, thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! (ANd I love the feedback!)
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
Excellent chapter