Reviews For Slightly Off
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: June 03, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Slightly off
8 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Slightly off
"He had come back. For Pam. And I had a real good feeling that it wasn't because he was denied the job offer." I loved seeing Jim's return from NY through the eyes of the camera man. And one teeny correction - "Finally being apart of what they should have been for so long." - I think you meant "a part". Apart is what they are now trying to correct!
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 11:47 am Title: Slightly off
Author's Response: Certainly not! Yet, I find insanity a great key to becoming a writer. =P
Date: May 29, 2007 11:47 am Title: Slightly off
Haha, yeah, a second review, because glad to know I wasn't going crazy... I didn't think I had gone back to FFN yet... so I must have just done it randomly really fast one day...
But yes, I don't want to be going crazy!
Author's Response: Certainly not! Yet, I find insanity a great key to becoming a writer. =P
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 10:22 am Title: Slightly off
Date: May 29, 2007 10:22 am Title: Slightly off
didn't I review this? Oh well. I still loved it the second time around... hehe, go camera guy!
Author's Response: lol - you did on FFN. So, thank you doubly!