Date: March 20, 2016 05:56 pm Title: Love Coma
I love this interaction between guy friends, especially the "you still look like a pansy with the blue".
And him having Pam's picture in a frame? Swoon.
Date: May 30, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Love Coma
Heee :) Dawesome!
Date: May 29, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Love Coma
Aw - nice! But now I want to know why Mark's out of a job and has no girlfriend...
I especially like the "pansy" references, and the photograph NEXT TO THE BED!!! Now, how could he have been seriously trying to get over Pam if he had a photo next to his bed? (Was the photo a visual aid? Hmmm. Never mind. Forget anything I said about the photo except for that I liked that part.)
Date: May 29, 2007 01:49 pm Title: Love Coma
I love the fact that you wrote this from Mark's pov. It's unusual in this fandom to see pieces like that, and you totally made it work!
Date: May 29, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Love Coma
Hehe, this was just all kinds of fun to read. And refreshing to see it from a different POV. I hope there's more to come :)
Author's Response: Thank you! My other story, "A Nice Break" is also Mark's POV. I'm currently out of ideas for more of his stories, but I'm writing quite a few more JAM ones. Maybe I'll be able to think up more Mark's in the meanwhile. I relate to Mark like this way too much to not write him. ^_^ Thanks for reading!
Date: May 29, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Love Coma
I LOVE MARK! He is my favorite fanon character. Good job with his personality in this one :) I want to see him again on the show...and meet Jim's parents. Awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love the idea of Mark - since we don't know much about him, there's so much to do with his character. The way I wrote Mark, he and I are one of the same. =P
Date: May 29, 2007 11:44 am Title: Love Coma
I love the fact that Jim has a picture of Pam by the bed... yeah, that would sure be a mood killer with Karen.
I love the phrase love coma...
and go jim!
Author's Response: Wow, I think that's the fastest I've ever gotten a review (less than five minutes after putting it up!) Thanks for reading!