Date: June 01, 2007 11:22 pm Title: You can guess who is the short side on the triangle
Since you enjoy killing fan favorites so much, you should make it into Clue and make it a guessing game. And yes, Karen is crazy as a loon, I don't care what anyone says.
Author's Response: Hmmm... there's potential in that idea...
8 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2007 08:09 pm Title: You can guess who is the short side on the triangle
I read the original version somewhere because I remember how much I loved this line - "Roy rubbed his chin thoughtfully. "I thought that if anyone was going to murder Halpert it would be me." This version is great, too - my favorite line in this one was "So Andy says to them: "So now you guys know how the Discovery Channel feels since the Crocodile Hunter got whacked." Nicely done.
Author's Response:
That would be fanfiction.net.
I miss the Crocodile Hunter.
Date: June 01, 2007 12:04 pm Title: You can guess who is the short side on the triangle
I gotta say, I love crazy!Karen. I don't for a second think she actually is a crazy, but it sure makes for a fun read.
Nice touch with writing one of the first believable camera guys I've read. Everyone's characterization was spot on, actually, which makes the contrast of Karen even more delicious.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm still not happy with it, but if it's okay with you, it's okay with me.
I don't think crazy... maybe just a little unhinged, just slightly pushed over the edge by this latest catastrophe... yeah, not likely.
And thanks for liking Steve the camera guy. I too despise the masses of totally unrealistic film crew, though I have read others done well before. Annakovsky and Kyrafic's Pack Up Your Bags, It's Never Too Late comes to mind.
Date: June 01, 2007 06:51 am Title: You can guess who is the short side on the triangle
Well, I liked it! (Dark is good.)
I especially liked the touch of Pam just being gone. Very interesting, and I'm not sure what to make of that. It's fun to think about.
I like Kelly and Roy's last lines, and your Chapter End Notes!!
Author's Response:
I do a lot of dark, don't I? It's either that or completely silly.
For what it's worth, I'm not sure what to make of any of this.
Author's Response:
I do a lot of dark, don't I? It's either that or completely silly.
For what it's worth, I'm not sure what to make of any of this.