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Reviewer: Mad Hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 11:44 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Portraiture

I love buffer chapters!! so much fun! YAY!! you broke the 100 mark! That should inflate your ego (that's what she said) lol! But this truly is an awesome story! I like that Jim can help out Pam, if only it could be vice versa. A whole week without Jim? I don't know how a girl could survive?! Well hopefully we will be reading about some Jam lovin soon. Will you post tonight to your dedicated readers because they are so awesome and broke the 100 mark???!?!? pretty pretty please?!?!?! We'll I'm gonna go re-read the story cause I got some time to chill, but a fantastic part!

Author's Response:

Haha, if my ego isn't big enough already!
If I had Jim, I don't think that I could survive a week. So you know, I have to give Pam some major props for that one. ;)
The next chapter is THE smutty chapter (not to try and get you even more anxious for it, of course)...at least I think it is. I'm going to try and write enough this afternoon to justify posting tonight. :)

I probably will. ;) 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 11:30 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Portraiture

adorable little chapter.  I giggled to myself the whole time thinking about the pervert sketch though..hehe

Author's Response: Hee!! I didn't even think about the pervert sketch when I was writing it! That's too funny! :)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 10:17 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Portraiture

Very nice!  I like how Dwight is such a good subject to draw because he'll keep the same expression for a long time.

But these two don't see each other enough. 

Reviewer: cbk145 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 06:30 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Keep these coming!

Reviewer: Mad Hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

awwwwww.......I love fluff!! this was a fantastic chapter! I can just imagine the possiblities of the calligraphy set. Will Jim ever see the abstract art that pam created? i honestly thought that, that was goin to be the art she wouldgive him. I'm glad you posted tonight or rather last night. Is Pam going to throw Jim a party? The great thing about this story is that there are so many possibilities to go with. You're doing an amazing job. I'm just wondering are we gonna see more of Jim's work life, as well as will Pam get to see Jim's place of buisness?especially since Jim has seen Pams, lol. but this was an fantastic chapter, I can't wait to see what you write next!!

sincerly,

your devoted reader

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

I want to leave a longer, more intelligent reviews than my normal babbling kelly-esque ones.

I was thinking about this story all night and how incredibly amazing it is.  I thought about the idea of Jim Halpert as this suave businessman living all alone in the city, spending Christmas by himself in another country and it seriously upset me.  In the most perfect way of course.  You made me want the simple things for him, where in the show you almost want him to have the swanky job and the fancy apartment...but here, you wish him cupcakes.  And Pam.  Of course Pam.

I am so completely in love with this world you've created.  Awesome awesome awesome... 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

You do 'fluff' very, very well.

Author's Response: Aw thanks! You're too sweet! :)

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 08:00 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Ahh, an explanation of the title. I loved this chapter. The line where Pam asks to be Jim's boyfriend is pretty funny. Oh, I just love love love this story.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Wonderful!!  I loved how Pam wanted to be his boyfriend!  So cute.  I love the touch also about how she's always paint-smeared when he comes over.

Reviewer: BillionStanleyNickls Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

expicit as you want is fine with me!  (btw, i normally don't care for au fic but this is SO good!)

Reviewer: Mad Hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: The Ex Factor

hmmm.... Jim better come clean about his past soon because this is making him look like an a$$! So my question is why would Karen want more money when she probably makes more than Jim?I liked the Dwight role and how he was there to sort of comfort Pam. Great chapter. I hope Jim finally divulges everything soon! all i can say is "more more more!"

Author's Response: Jim does eventually come clean about his past...not immediately, it takes some coaxing, but he does do it.
And Karen is just all around evil, and there will be more of that to come in the future as well.

Reviewer: dunderjim Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 05:18 pm Title: Waking Up and Starting Over: Nine Years

Love this one, it is a real treat to read.

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: The Ex Factor

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!

Love Kelly hating Karen. Love Dwight comforting Pam. Love Angela being Angela. Love that Jim took his ex to a restaurant that he knows she hates. I love that Pam curses. Love how Jim and Pam are getting closer.                                            

 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: The Ex Factor

Ok that definately was the BEST way to ever spend an afternoon...of course now I'm completely not ready for a fundraiser I have tonight...but oh well

I am a huge fan of AUs and this one is being done so astonishingly well...I can not wait for what you've got next.

p.s. I love nothing more than Karen being the evil, gold digging ex-wife...I didn't expect that at all. 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 02:13 pm Title: New York, New Life: Making Friends

I'm totally loving this, it is a lovely way to spend my afternoon...

i just wanted to say that when I was reading Jim's directions to his house I was picturing this corner in the village, near washington square...except instead of a pizza place it's a porn shop...haha

off to read the next 8 chapters! 

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: The Ex Factor

Because of C & W I have turned into a serial refresher.  If I pay you a million Schrute bucks will you do nothing but post chapter after chapter?  

Seriously...you are fabulous.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 11:05 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: The Ex Factor

1. Awesome chapter.

2. I still love Dwight. He's like Pam's creepy guardian angel.

3. I hate Karen. She doesn't make enough money? Geez. If she was the one who broke his heart, than shouldn't she not be gauging (sp?) him for money?

4. Yay Jam.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 10:46 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: The Ex Factor

She's so successful herself, and they didn't have any kids (I assume?) and she's trying to get more money out of him?  Blech!  Stand "on your own", Karen, with the money you're already getting!

I really like Dwight in this chapter.  And thank goodness Pam got Kelly to take her table.  It would have been terrible for Pam to wait on that table.

Good chapter!  Post the next one when you can!  I'm enjoying this so much. 

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 09:53 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

This is a nice chapter and a really sweet first kiss.

As for the smut, I'm comfortable with explicit, but in the context of THIS story, I would say maybe moderate at most.  Otherwise it seems like it wouldn't flow too well.

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 09:50 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

I will happily read along with anything you see fit to post as long as it doesn't involve untimely death (a la Billy Joel smashing his car into the Golden Beet) or clowns (a strictly personal request).  I would also be sad if Jim's plane crashed in the south pacific and he wound up on an island and ultimately showed up years later with a grizzly man beard.  I highly encourage any and all forms of smut.  Woo hoo!  Can't wait.

Author's Response: and he wound up on an island and ultimately showed up years later with a grizzly man beard.
That might be kind of hot, I do like a man with a beard. :) Haha, but obviously, that isn't what happened. And I don't think anyone has to worry about drastic twists in the story. I mean, they're fun, but...I like to try and make my stories fairly realistic. 

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 07:34 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

You mean people don't like smut? Really? I say don't hold back. !! I absolute love this fic!!! Smut or no smut!!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 03:49 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

Okay, for a moment I thought he was leaving leaving, and I was worried. Back in a month is not so bad :)

And, for the record, I am completely fine with you making this as smutty as you like! 

Reviewer: soverykitsch Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 01:12 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

Aw, that was such a sweet chapter! Great job once again!

P.S. Smut is my friend, my very good friend. I love me some explicit smut.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2007 11:01 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

OK, OK, OK, OK [/Kelly] I hadn't read this at all because I was overseas [and dying of starvation] 'till last morning but I came on MTT and I noticed THIS and I read everything in about forty-five minutes and I am in love. Seriously. This is - amazing. There's no Dunder Mifflin but the characters are all there and I'm so, so in love with this, and the - everything

AND I LOVE THAT YOU'VE POSTED 14 CHAPTERS in EIGHT DAYS. You are made of more awesome than this story. OK?

OK.

Anyway I love the JAM - first of all, Pam, because I like to believe that even if she'd never met Jim, she'd have enough sense not to go with it.

And Jim - I wouldn't at all be entirely surprised if he divorced Karen? AM I RIGHT OR AM I RIGHT? And that would fit perfect, too, because they may be able to work for a while, but they're also not the kind of couple who'd be able to work long-time - they're too similar but they're different too.

And finally, raunchy? Bring on your worst [or best, asjdskjal] because your smut is some of my favourite smut, and I love this story, so favourite!smut in love!story would be all kinds of amazing. :P

Alright, now that I'm sure I've scared you senseless, I'm going to go read this again, or something.  

Reviewer: hello12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2007 10:56 pm Title: Waking Up and Starting Over: Nine Years

I love, LOVE this story! And I LOVE that you update so frequently. I've had other stories I loved, but they took foreverrr to update so I would forget about them & lose interest. I check this page many times a day just to read this! Keep up the good work!! (and the frequent updates ;),, ) 

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