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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:33 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

Poor Pam!  And poor Jim for being an idiot and not realizing you can say "I can't make that meeting time"!  That was a big-time mistake on his part.

I really liked your description of Pam's show.  I also liked how she was just sitting in a corner at first, and eventually, things really went well, except for the one thing that really mattered! 

Hey, I thought you weren't going to tell us what was coming up!  You can't help yourself, can you? 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:16 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

Well, we knew the angst was coming... still sad, though. Darn this AU Karen for screwing everything up! It was nice to see that everyone else showed up, though. And of course I trust that Jim will find a way to make it up to her...

Reviewer: hello12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:49 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

wow. please update soon.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:43 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

oh, geez. I love the fact that they have a fight? Because they're not freaking perfect, as much as we love them. But I also kind of hate the fact that they had a fight, because I'm indecisive, and this is JIMANDPAM here. And they couldn't help both. yeesh.

Still. I loved this chapter, anyways, especially since it's got me all undecided.

I am so strange.

Reviewer: mbergen Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:39 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this story - I read about it on the Office message board on the NBC site - and spent all last evening reading it - can't wait for more. I love how you've integrated many of the office characters into this.

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:17 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

Wow, this chapter was sad.  I feel so bad for both Jim and Pam, jim couldn't help it but Pam has a right to be mad.  You did a great job of adding conflict to the story without making either characters look bad.  I can't wait until the next chapter!  I hope it gets happier soon!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:04 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

Aw, jeez, I knew I should have saved this chapter!  I will blame you for wearing out my F5 key waiting for an update! 

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:57 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

I really liked that Pam yelled at Jim. I'm glad she let him know how she felt and didn't try to hold back.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:52 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

Karen is evil for her plotting and planning - and I'm anxious  to hear Jim's excuse as to why he never made it there.  That is, if Pam gives him a chance to explain - which right now I can see that she might not.

Reviewer: cbk145 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Waking Up and Starting Over: Nine Years

This is one heck of a story, you could make this a dream sequence if "The Office" ever became a move :)  Nice work

Reviewer: dunderjim Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Waking Up and Starting Over: Nine Years

This story is really good, and you are the best for getting the chapters out so fast.  It is so nice to not have to wait days inbetween chapters.

Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 06:47 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

I love this story!  I am afraid to see what comes next though but I'm sure you will do a great job with it.  I loved that even Karen thought Pam's art was good.  Oh and i would love another update tonight!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 06:07 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

Ok, reviewing AGAIN so you update again!  I'm sucked in already!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 06:02 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

Your Karen is dreadful, dreadful, horrible.  Thank goodness the real one wasn't that bad!  I really don't understand why she'd get much of anything, with no kids from the marriage.  And her company is thinking of absorbing his?  Evil, evil for her to bring that up!

I love this: “Well, she’s nothing at all like you,” he said. “So I’m rather fond of that.” 

 



Author's Response: Haha! I loved that line too! :)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:30 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

Seriously, I hang on your every word.

This story is fantastic.  Karen scares me!

Keep up the amazing work!

 

Reviewer: Mad Hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 04:57 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

OoOoOoOoOoOo no!!! She is sooo evil. I have a feeling she like one of those girls that can never be happy so the people around her and cared for her should be just as miserable as she is! I have a feeling Jim just gave out too much info!!Plus how can she be married without being legally divorced from Jim? But wow. I'm gone for a couple of hours and all of this happens!! From what I read it doesn't seem like Karen is thrilled that Jim is seeing someone else, as if she expected him to pine after her forever. Urrrggggg!!! I hate hypocritical people!! She created on HIM! She got pregnant with ANOTHER mans baby? Yet she tries to sit there all wounded?!?! I don't think so! Please let Jim finally grow a set and stop letting Karen control the situation! I loved how Jim was soo proud of Pam and doesn't think of her as a waitress. But a very well written chapter! Please post again tonight...hopefully before 10:00?!?!? WOW you are almost done?!?!? What will I do? say it aint so! This is just too great of a fic to end!!

Author's Response:

Haha! You leave such enthusiastic responses!!

You might not believe me, but the way that Karen is in this story is actually based on someone that I actually knew. She and Jim are legally divorced, but she keeps thinking that she can find loopholes to get more and more from him. I know people who have gone through some really nasty divorces like this, unfortunately. People can be cruel.

I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to post by 10 (Eastern time), I still have a few edits that I need to make to the next chapter before posting, but it will be up sometime tonight. :) 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless

HA!  Creed is awesome!  Love the gypsy bit!

Reviewer: JipsyJam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Waking Up and Starting Over: Nine Years

I love that Karen is evil in this story. I like having a really good reason to despise her. I got a lot of crap for hating her just because she was dating Jim last season. 

Can't wait for more... I will be waiting patiently at my computer all night.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 03:40 pm Title: New York, New Life: Blue Paint

HA! Pam & Jim playing jokes on Dwight -- awesome.  I liked how Jim talked Pam through her art project, too.  Very AU-Jim-like.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 03:10 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

Uh oh - I hope Karen didn't trick him into signing papers giving away his rights to something!  Interesting that her company may be buying his.

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 03:08 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

Jim! What did you sign! I have a bad feeling about this....

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 02:52 pm Title: When it Rains, It Pours: Bitter Winter

You are the fastest poster I have ever seen. That's awesome. Great chapter, with evil Karen playing the lead role in this one. At least she likes Pam's art.

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

I'm really glad you didn't cut this chapter.  It definitely added to the story, as well as showcased the supportive element of Pam's relationships.    Awesome.

Reviewer: albie_ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 12:04 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

Gah, ever since you started hinting at the angst and well, naming the chapters "calm before the storm", I click for new chapters with anticipation and dread. Because oh man, I don't even think I can imagine the shit that will hit the fan. Even this lovely filler chapter, all i read was, "Oh, JIm won't be there, will he?!?!?" Hee.  But I'm loving it all, to be honest. I really adore this universe that you've created and how you've developed the characters and inserted them into this storyline. Wonderful writing style. I look forward to more! And thank you for updating so often. You spoil us completely. 

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 11:53 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

Well I'm guessing that that is a giveaway that he is NOT coming to the art show.

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