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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a beautiful story. And the last paragraph, especially the last line, were just lovely. I enjoyed that it was all Jim's POV.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Such a lovely way to sum up all that's happened.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1

That moment was perfect, and that story was great. So amazingly descriptive, and I loved the use of flashbacks.... great job!


Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2007 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm catching up on my reading a bit!  This is really nice, Smurfette!


Author's Response: Thanks! I like your username!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful story. You did a great job of getting inside Jim's head.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sweet!


Author's Response: Thanks!

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