Date: August 14, 2009 01:30 am Title: Should Have Could Have
"...dressed in a simple dark shit..."
HAHA Might wanna fix that one!! =)
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 08:59 pm Title: It's 3AM I Must be Lonely
How sweet that she wore his boxers to work! And now we know that the secret to his awesome pre-TJ haircut hair is Pantene. I just love how in love with each other they are.
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Should Have Could Have
Jim finally gave her the card. The timing was perfect for them both to get beyond the first date nightmare and admit to themselves and each other just how in love they were. Great chapter. I loved the dinner invitation at the end!
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Not a Good Start
Wow. After all the waiting and yearning, Jim blows it with his first question. I love how you said "his mouth said" as though Jim wasn't connected to the ill-timed question!
Date: June 10, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Not a Good Start
Oh, sad. But I still like it. it seems like this is what would really happen. They both have to talk about it and get it out of the way. I have though though that Jim and Pam will get through this.
Date: June 10, 2007 10:10 am Title: Should Have Could Have
You know, usually I'd feel cheated that I didn't get to read what was in the note--at least what you thought was in the note--but since you alluded to the fact that he at least wrote "I love you" in it, I think that was just fine. Peachy, in fact! I love it that Pam's so overcome by his words, because it's so authentic to her character. So sweet.
Author's Response: You are right on what I am trying for with that. For this story the actual note text was not as important as the effect it had on Pam. Thanks for noticing=)
Date: June 08, 2007 12:04 pm Title: Should Have Could Have
This story is wonderful! I love the characters' reactions and their dialogue. Please write more.
8 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 11:23 am Title: Not a Good Start
I'm liking it. I've been thinking the subject of their silence once Roy and Pam were over had to come up pretty early. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take Jim and Pam from here.