1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2018 11:00 am Title: Bread Aisle
Great. Would be a nice place for Katy to work out why Jim dumped her and to talk about it. Have her put 2&2 together on the timing of her dumping. Would be nice for Pam to get to find out why Jim and Katy split up too. It would make her feel special if he dumped a mega hot girl like Katy because of his feelings for her. Good story but a big missed opportunity IMO.
Date: July 21, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
That was great! I'm really into Jim and Pam as parents stories right now, but haven't been able to find any really good ones -- until now! You wrote both Jim and Pam very in character, as well as all the people they encountered; I especially like how you wrote Jan, you really captured her personality. And I hate Todd Packer too -- I'm glad Jim lost his temper with him! ;) Once again, excellent job!
Date: July 14, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
I hate Todd Packer too, I hate him more than mayonaise. but I love this story. Kinda sad to see it end.
9 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2007 11:36 am Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
I really liked this whole story. Glad it ended with everybody there. "There are no rules in Wal-Mart" which as far as I'm concerned is yet another reason to go to Target. Well done.
Date: July 08, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
I loved how Jim stood up to him. Great job! Oh, and I thought it was neat how the kids names were Jon and Ben...because if you listen to John Mayer any, he has a song titled 83. Go check it out....this chapter reminds me of the second verse. Cute!
Date: July 08, 2007 09:43 am Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
i also hate todd packer, so this was great! i've really enjoyed your stories binxbaby! very well written. thanks!
Date: July 07, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Somewhere between the toothpaste, the hemmoroid cream, and EPT tests
Kelly hiding condoms - awesome.
"Brangelina adopted another baby from Antarctica"
So funny, because I know in another story, I made a comment like that, and how did they find a baby from there (I can't for the life of me remember the story or author... too bad.... :()
I really really like this characterization of Ryan
Date: July 07, 2007 03:40 pm Title: BBQ sauce is in the condiment section....
So, I started reading this WAY back in chapter one, and then real life got in the way. So now I get to play catch up... yay!
Little Baby Halpert=cuteness
I liked the interaction with Roy... believable. Its like, Jim is still ... not jealous, not angry really, but that emotion... a combination of those two for the time he spent with Pam.
And of course, unflinchly rigid rules.
A good argument chapter...
Date: July 06, 2007 11:46 pm Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
Excellent chapter. I really like Karen's characterization, here- the way she, at first, maybe derives pleasure from Pam's insecurity but ultimately shows true happiness for them. It really ties in well with how nice she is but, also, how insecure she was over the Jam 'relationship' during s3. You also have Jim and Pam's voices down, too- *loved* Jim thinking that he should look for Pam's mind amongst the chips.
Date: July 06, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
"Well...if it isn't the queer!" That line made me so happy! I love to hate that man so much, and your Packer/Jim dialogue was awesome.
Well done.
Loved the whole thing. Very fun!
Date: July 06, 2007 08:41 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
That was so good. These just keep getting better and better, which is a very good reason to continue... I loved Pam during labor making Jim fetch things and I love that Jim's the kind of guy who would follow such a totally insane request. I loved the Todd Packer/Jim confrontation, I really believed that in this situation Jim would totally snap. You've done a really wonderful job with this whole fic, I throughly enjoyed reading every update and I can't wait to read whatever you write next.
Date: July 06, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
I really hate Todd Packer, too! Glad to see Jim confront him - no one deserved it more! I'm sorry to see this is over, I've really enjoyed the visits to the Scranton Wal-Mart! Oh, and Jim, Pam and the little Halperts, too, of course!
Date: July 06, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
As much as I hate that the story is completed, I think this was a great way to end it - with a baby, an office reunion in the hospital, and a knocked-out Todd Packer.
I loved every chapter of this, and I loved trying to guess which character would be in Wal-Mart each time. Great job, and thanks for writing it! :o]
Date: July 06, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...
I hate Todd Packer, too. There's nary a redeeming facet about him. Great to see him get what he had coming.
This was a great story. Wish it wasn't the last chapter, though. I'd love to read more.
10 [Report This]Date: July 03, 2007 10:32 am Title: The furniture in the Gardening section must be really comfortable....
*sniff*
*sob*
10 [Report This]Date: July 03, 2007 10:20 am Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
LMFAO!!!!!!!
Can't......breathe.....laughing.....too.....hard!
10 [Report This]Date: July 03, 2007 10:16 am Title: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....
I will happily inseminate you. *snort!* *giggle*
10 [Report This]Date: July 03, 2007 09:53 am Title: BBQ sauce is in the condiment section....
LMAO.....that is the funniest sh*t I ever read.
8 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 05:39 pm Title: The furniture in the Gardening section must be really comfortable....
I love the contrast between someone who appears crazy (Pam) and someone who actually is (Creed), and then to have that followed up with a parallel of two people running around frantically looking for something in panic (Pam and then Jim).
And I can't get enough of Jim as a daddy. It would be awesome if we get to that point in the show some day.
Date: July 01, 2007 09:00 am Title: The furniture in the Gardening section must be really comfortable....
Awww poor Jim! You definitely wrote FranticJim very well! I was wondering what Pam was searching for, and I'm so glad it was the planner! Can't wait for round 2 to arrive!
Date: July 01, 2007 08:51 am Title: The furniture in the Gardening section must be really comfortable....
Yeah, that *really* wasn't the smartest move on Jim's part! At least now he's learned his lesson. And I loved Pam's reaction to Jim's story and his fear, and her reveal of her condition :)
8 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 08:28 pm Title: The furniture in the Gardening section must be really comfortable....
I read this after reading several of the "55" stories, and my first thought was, wait - this is a lot longer than 55 words! (Yea, I'm a dork.) This was a great chapter. I couldn't believe Creed drinking vinegar - blech. And I truly felt Jim's panic as he searched for Jon and Creed - nothing scarier than a missing child. And a second baby - so sweet.
Date: June 30, 2007 08:12 pm Title: The furniture in the Gardening section must be really comfortable....
Yayy! Another baby good for Jim and Pam. You did a great job with this update, particularly writing Creed. I can't wait to read more!
Date: June 27, 2007 08:58 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
Hahaha! I loved the little "twist" at the end. This chapter was a little weird, but very in character from what we saw in WA. I wonder who the unexpected guest is! Can't wait!
Date: June 26, 2007 07:47 pm Title: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...
I loved this! As a former photo lab technician (at CVS not WalMart) I know how truly disturbing the pictures that people drop off can be. Trust me I have seen some truly horrific stuff and its usually only ugly people that photograph themselves. But I digress... This was a really great update, I'm a huge fan of this fic and I always look forward to your updates. Your writing is great and you've done a wonderful job of capturing all the characters. I can't wait to read more, update soon!