Date: June 15, 2007 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This sounded like an actual episode - you have everyone's voices really down. I was so afraid that Kelly was going to say that Karen and Jim eloped so it was a wonderful surprise that they actually broke up instead. And I love Kevin telling Pam he had her back during her confrontation with Karen. And being asked out by a hot firefighter, ooh la la. Having been married to my own hot firefighter for many years I can understand the attraction.
Date: June 09, 2007 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! You really captured the real essence of Jim and Pam- Please keep writing- I cant wait to read what happens next!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I think I will. I'm not sure yet but maybe :)
Date: June 08, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, it shall be good when it starts with Dwight saying Question. I used to do that a lot like Dwight (say Question then ask it)... but now every time I do I think of Dwight and catch myself most times...
I can agree with Pam and not having money. I make my lunch (a simple PB and J), daily. And my brother always asks why I don't just buy my lunch at the pool (where I work)... and I say its too expensive. And what is worse about that is a full lunch there costs two dollars! Two fifty if I get a snack. But that is just a daily expense I can't afford. I am jealous of those who can! I figure one day I will splurge and get it... maybe a last day of summer treat.
"Is the building going to burn down soon?" Ryan asked, a hopeful glint in his eyes.
Haha!!!
They broke up! Awesomeness!
Well, I know I spend too much time with kids, but I read coffee at Dora's and I thought Dora the Explorer!
This was a sweet story. Enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
I do that myself and I find myself doing it even more now and I chuckle because I think of Dwight, too.
You save so much money not taking a lunch. I've been splurging for a little while now but my bank account is totally yelling at me. :)
They HAD to break-up. I just can not deal with her anymore. AT ALL.
Thanks!
Date: June 08, 2007 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Two things: (1) If your name is indeed Heather, then we share a name! (2) Would you consider continuing this or writing a sequel? I love it...it's just so sweet and...yea.
Author's Response: 1) Yup, I'm a Heather! ;) 2) I'm thinking about continuing and following the storyline of the show but with this instead. Maybe. Thank you very much!
Date: June 08, 2007 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! I think you had the voices down well, and I really liked how Pam's "passive/aggressive" line!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)