Date: December 25, 2025 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1
I found this entertaining, and I found it easy to picture Jim and Pam being lost to their mutual desire in this way. If you ever reread this, you'll just need to correct the dialogue punctuation and make some small tweaks with the tenses so that they are consistent. Great job with the sexual tension between them even before the main event.
Date: June 17, 2007 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like the way you wrote Pam in this story. She's has to be a bright person to pull off the things she does on the show, so it stands to reason she should have this degree of self-awareness.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate that. Pam is one of my favorite characters on tv. I think she resonates so well with the audience because she is so believable. I'm glad you think I captured some of that. :)
Author's Response:
I really appreciate that. Pam is one of my favorite characters on tv. I think she resonates so well with the audience because she is so believable. I'm glad you think I captured some of that. :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2007 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
So good. So, so good.
I've been getting annoyed with the dialogue in fics lately, but this was perfect. So in character. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is my second attempt at writing, well anything really! I'm a little Office obsessed, and writing this story (and my first one, After Hours Women's Appreciation) helps to burn off some of that energy. It's just a bonus that someone actually enjoys it! :)
Date: June 10, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will beta anything you send me :) I love these, I'm so glad I got to read them first :):)
Author's Response: Thanks again TearCatcher. You'll be getting some more in the near future....
Date: June 10, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. just wow.
I'm a little speechless.
I loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you JamFan. Being a fan of JAM myself, it's high praise that you enjoyed the story.