1 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2023 12:30 am Title: No hero in her sky
I'm rereading some old favorites, and this story is just as good fifteen years later. I love the dialogue and the way that every character is a little twisted. This is a really fun and interesting AU. Funny, steamy, and moving. Thanks for writing!
Date: December 15, 2007 07:55 am Title: And so it is
i have to say, i think this is kind of a bizarre series :) but it's executed *flawlessly*. i get it. i've seen the movie and i like the twist. i think you are staying true to the characters and the film at the same time. i just hope to see more!
9 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2007 02:03 am Title: And so it is
Can't wait for more! I love the movie and your take on it using Jim, Pam, Ryan and Karen. Also love the smut.
Date: June 18, 2007 09:10 pm Title: No hero in her sky
"Good for you"
Haha, I'm going to use that line.
*waits patiently*
Date: June 18, 2007 08:57 pm Title: No love no glory
No buffer here. This is a great idea. So is smut! Keep it going!
Date: June 17, 2007 12:55 pm Title: No love no glory
"I learned yesterday that I just want to write smut for a little while." Keep it coming!
10 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2007 05:38 am Title: The shorter story
Sounds like JAM here
8 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2007 05:36 am Title: Most of the time
this could be funny when Jim/Pam meet...
8 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2007 05:34 am Title: Life goes easy on me
I'm curious to see what Jim is like, Ryan's jerk side is really on display
9 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2007 05:30 am Title: Just like you said it would be
I was sad when you ended the NYC story, but I think this story has potentail to be just as good!
Date: June 16, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Most of the time
Oh, Ryan, you tricky devil.
Good job with the chat scene!
8 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 02:26 pm Title: The shorter story
I've been reading, but not reviewing because I hadn't seen the movie so i've been kinda lost. Thanks for adding the link to the clip of the movie. It was very helpful and awkwardly funny. I'm intrigued now so I'm sure I'll stay with it. Nice work.
Date: June 16, 2007 01:55 pm Title: The shorter story
I haven't seen the movie, but this is really compelling. I'm interested in seeing where this goes!
Date: June 15, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Life goes easy on me
Oh, Ryan really is a skeevy little guy. Great chapter. Can't wait for the dirtier stuff, too! Heh.
Date: June 15, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Just like you said it would be
Oh I like it so far. Very nicely written. And I realized that I've forgotten a lot of what happens in Closer, but I'm kind of glad. I won't be comparing so much. But I'm really liking it.
9 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Life goes easy on me
it's really hard to write a dirty two-person IM conversation. *shrug*
TRUST ME, I KNOW!!! ;)
Date: June 14, 2007 06:11 am Title: And so it is
This is really interesting. I think you did a good job with the character traits. The changes are good, stays true to both characters. And I agree, Ryan is definitely more business-like. I'm curious as to what direction you're going to take the characters so keep writing!
Date: June 13, 2007 05:42 pm Title: And so it is
knowing your previous work, this should be good!
Date: June 13, 2007 02:50 pm Title: And so it is
I've never seen the movie but I saw the ads for it on tv. Should be very entertaining, I look foward to reading it.