Date: July 17, 2007 01:41 am Title: New and different.
Well, I hated it in that I hate Roy and what he did to her. And there's little doubt in my mind that if Pam had actually married him he probably would have become an abusive husband later on. His behavior hinted at that.
But you did a lovely job conveying all the actions and emotions, as usual. I really love this story, and I am definitely staying tuned. :)
Author's Response:
thanks, yeah not a huge fan of Roy... but I figured he wouldn't just disappear, so...yikes. But anyway thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 11:10 pm Title: New and different.
<3 because you've done it again.
Author's Response: thank you ;-)
Date: July 16, 2007 09:52 pm Title: New and different.
dayum! wow. Roy's a tool. Glad he's gone, gone, gone. Now Pam is free and clear to be guiltfree about her relationship with Jim. I did not mind the "darkness" of this chapter at all, it seemed as if a weight needed to be lifted and this did it. Great chapter.
Author's Response: oh good! Thank you. Exactly, we can't let Pam have her way with Jim if she still has Roy's shadow hanging over her head. ;-)
Date: July 16, 2007 06:56 pm Title: New and different.
as un-fun as that was, it was needed. we (oh yeah, and Pam...) needed closure, so... that was good. :)
Author's Response:
thanks ;-) now back to the fun, I say!
Date: July 16, 2007 04:56 pm Title: New and different.
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: July 16, 2007 01:26 pm Title: New and different.
...loved it
Author's Response: thank you so much.
Date: July 16, 2007 01:08 pm Title: New and different.
Loved it! Pam's self-discussion was really great and very FNB.
Author's Response: lol thank you! love me some FNB.
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 11:22 am Title: New and different.
Very good...but tense. Bring back the sexy, please : )
Author's Response: you got it ;-) stay tuned!
Date: July 16, 2007 10:58 am Title: New and different.
Pretty heavy, but my vote goes with 'loved it.' As always, well done. I just love your Mark so much especially his interaction and relationship with Pam.
Author's Response: thank you for the vote. I love Mark too.
Date: July 16, 2007 10:53 am Title: New and different.
You have no idea how giddy I get every time I visit the site and find that you've updated. Seriously, I get withdrawals between chapters.
Another amazing chapter. I love how you made Roy sympathetic at the end instead of completely despicable like he usually is in fics.
Author's Response:
lol I can't believe you love seeing a new chapter so much!! that makes me so happy!!!!
And thanks for the compliments about this chapter. I was really nervous about it, so I'm glad that you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 10:30 am Title: Burn and beat
Goddamn. That was awesome.
Author's Response:
thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 10:27 am Title: New and different.
This chapter is amazing! I wondered if you would have Jim hit him and then *BAM!* Pam socks it to him! Loved it. I liked that you didn't have Jim jump all over him, but rather he backed Pam up as she took control of her own situation. Please don't keep us waiting!!
Author's Response:
yeah I wanted Pam to stand up for herself. I considered Jim just totally letting Roy have it, but this let's Pam take a little journey of her own. Anyway, thanks. I'll try to get something new up asap.
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 10:23 am Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
HOT HOT HOT! Loved this chapter! I like it when Jim takes initiative. You have such a wonderful gift when it comes to describing the details of your story while still keeping it moving. These stories have such an amazing energy.
Author's Response: ooo I like it when Jim takes initiative too... yum.
Date: July 16, 2007 10:03 am Title: New and different.
gah! Go Pam!!!!! and Jim. and Mark! they all rock. i really loved this. the question of which person to be was inspiring to watch, and you did a wonderful job of writing it. the more i read of this the more i love it, so keep it coming :)
Author's Response: lol thank you so much.
Date: July 16, 2007 09:58 am Title: New and different.
See ya, Roy, and don't let the door hit you on the way out!
Excellent job on this chapter. Looking foward to the next.
Author's Response:
amen! Thanks, I'll hopefully have something new soon!!
Date: July 16, 2007 09:56 am Title: New and different.
Take me to my happy place! Just kidding. This chapter was really well-written, but hea-vy! I hope the next one is full of JAM lovin'..Pam needs it!
Author's Response: Pam does need it!! and so do we ;-) Don't fret, some JAM is definitely on the way.
Date: July 16, 2007 09:46 am Title: New and different.
Loved it. Want more. Like yesterday. Really Loved it.
Author's Response: haha! hopefully there'll be more by tomorrow or wednesday. thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 16, 2007 09:36 am Title: New and different.
i'm surprised roy's head is still attached to his body--loved how jim & mark stood up for her! so glad pam punched him too! more soon!!!
Author's Response: lol not gonna lie, my original version of this had Pam literally grabbing roy by the family jewels...but then I realized I was writing myself and not Pam lol. Anyway, thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 08:54 am Title: New and different.
Awesome!
I loved how Pam finally really stood up for herself, and it was with a little bit of Jim's help... kind of how Jim gave her the strength to use the strength in her, if that makes sense. Loved it.
Author's Response: that makes total sense and was exactly what I was going for! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 08:52 am Title: New and different.
Loved it......now it's time for Jim to kiss the bruises away, right?? ;-)
Author's Response: am I that transparent? ;-)
Date: July 16, 2007 08:43 am Title: New and different.
Roy is a prick! excellent chapter please continue!
Author's Response: ;-) agreed. and thank you!
Date: July 16, 2007 08:39 am Title: Burn and beat
Okay, I was a little nervous at Pam's initial lack of spine, but she pulled through! Count me in as loving it!
Author's Response: lol counted! thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 08:32 am Title: New and different.
I loved that! That was a very realistic, three dimensional depiction of Roy and fits perfectly with what we saw of him in Cocktails and The Negotiation. Great job.
Author's Response: thank you very much. I was a little nervous about writing Roy, but I'm gald you liked it and thought it was realistic. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 05:32 am Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
Eeee, another amazing chapter!!
I love that both Jim and Pam felt the significance of Pam wearing Jim's shirt, and that hot moment they shared inside, and then when he followed her outside. Wow.
My favorite thing about this chapter was Jim stopping Pam from going any further, because he wanted their first time to be more special than just a quickie on his front porch. Aww, Jim.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I know soo cute of him ;-) Good old Jim, always a gentleman.
Date: July 15, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
Heffing hotness. I am really lazy about reviews, and I read a bunch of fanfic, but I had to log in and comment on this one. Wow.
And Ilove the sweatshirt stuff, which is so realistic and true. In fact I stole my husbands sweatshirt the other day (obviously more out of necessity than anything, but it is still nice to have boy smell on an oversized sweatshirt)
I love this story so much. And It is amazing how you can turn a touch or a simple kiss into an extremely hot moment. You are a great fic writer!
Author's Response: thank you!! Lol I am so jealous of your sweatshirt...I'm painfully single right now (tmi?) and I would kill for a boy-smelling oversized sweatshirt ;-) thanks for reviewing!!!