Date: July 09, 2007 05:37 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Very intense! excellent work. Please continue,
Author's Response: Thanks, bruce. Will do.
Date: July 09, 2007 04:28 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Whew indeed. You're writing things on the angsty side but it is all so lovely that I can't help but feel this hopeful current underneath. My favorite kind of story overall and you're writing it beautifully. More. Please. Soon. Thank you. :)
Author's Response: glad you feel the hope. It's def there. I'm not really into TOTAL debbie downer type stuff. lol although some people might disagree with that. Anyway, sooo glad it's your fav kind of story and sooo thrilled that you took the time to review. Thanks a million!
Date: July 09, 2007 02:18 am Title: Diners and Dreams
“I’m not,” she told him. And then she sort of glanced off to the side like she couldn’t believe her own ears and the twinkle grew into a smile and she raised her eyebrows. Mark just stood there…still confused. “Jim is a good guy…and I’m not engaged,”
Pam's realization here is such a beautiful part of this chapter! You make us feel like we're just learning it with her.
And I can't even tell you how much I loved Mark and Mindy's interaction. Like, you just know he probably goes in for the sole purpose of bugging the hell out of her sometimes.
And oh sweet god. The last few paraghaphs? So well done. I really really really thought they were just going to give in there, even though I kept going "No, it wouldn't be right now." And then they didnt. And like, just great job. Because you really captured that kind of tug-of-war "I want to but I shouldn't" feeling so beautiful.
Author's Response:
ugh thanks, that's one of my favorite moments so far too. Just cause it's very subtle for her, and sooo not subtle for the rest of the world. I'm like "PAM! You're not with Roy...JUMP JIM ALREADY." but she's gotta do it slow. lol.
And glad you got the tug-of-war feeling. Awesome review! So helpful for me. Thanks!
Date: July 09, 2007 12:37 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Damn, girl. I think I need a second.
Wow.
Loving it. That's about as articulate as I can be at this moment. ;)
Author's Response: lol I, too, needed a second after I wrote it. ;-) Glad you're loving it. I hope that sticks.
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2007 11:23 pm Title: Burn and beat
best fic of the last month, no offense but way better and more realistic than FDWM. awesome job.
Author's Response: thanks. FDWM was just a more poetic take on things. A lot less office and a lot more self-indulgence on my part ;-) This one is more true to the show, I think. Or not...at all... but you get what I mean.
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2007 11:08 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
I have to say, each chapter gets better & I wasn't sure that was possible!! Waiting for updates is so difficult. :D
Author's Response: lol thanks!! I'll try and keep the updates coming
Date: July 08, 2007 11:05 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
ok, the sexual tension you've got going here is AMAZING. Seriously, you're like the master at creating that. So glad you updated so quickly, but now it's like a drug...and I need more. :-)
Author's Response: lol well here's hoping I can keep it up ;-) I'm sooo happy you're enjoying it.
Date: July 08, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Red light, Green light
oooo the suspense is killing me! I love this story! Please update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2007 12:18 pm Title: Red light, Green light
I love this story! You have such a knack for describing the sexual tension. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment!! ;)
Author's Response:
lol that's cause sexual tension is my life. Oh shit, did I say that out loud? I meant to say my love life is booming... Next installment should be up today or tomorrow ;-) Thanks for the review
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2007 11:18 am Title: Red light, Green light
I'm in love with this story
Author's Response: Thank you so much ;-) There should be something new by tomorrow. And congrats on being the 69th review ::grin:: Kevin would be very proud.
Date: July 08, 2007 12:51 am Title: Red light, Green light
Oh, Jim.
This was incredibly heartbreaking and tension-filled, and just... perfect. I adore the angst, because it twists my stomach in knots, and gives me these delicious warm fuzzies. Not that that makes any sense. lol I can't wait for more.
Date: July 07, 2007 10:47 pm Title: Red light, Green light
OMG!!!! Pam come back! I need to know what happens like NOW! Oh man you've got a seriously addicting story on your hands here. I hope you're happy. ;-) That was some HOT stuff going on in the kitchen, and Jim....it's a total green light - just go for it. LOVE THIS STORY.
Date: July 07, 2007 10:20 pm Title: Red light, Green light
I remember reading the first chapter of this and really liking the premise with the back and forth poetic inner monologue. Glad I found it again. I'm looking foward to the continuation of this story.
Author's Response: thank you. Glad you found it too
Date: July 07, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Red light, Green light
This was really good. I like your writing style - it completely draws me in. The whole red light, green light thing was so great, and so true to the characters.
Author's Response: thanks I love references to childhood, so, red light green light! ;-) glad you enjoyed it
Date: July 07, 2007 08:00 pm Title: Red light, Green light
Yayy! An update. Poor Jim, that guy just needs to get better timing. I really liked the quiet simplicity of this chapter and how Jim and Pam managed to say so much to each other with out actually saying that much. This was another great update, I am on the edge of my seat, I can't wait to read more!
Date: July 07, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Red light, Green light
can I just say that I LOVE your writing style?!?!!? Keep it coming! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! I'm so glad you like the style. I'll try to keep posting
Date: July 07, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Red light, Green light
awwww. poor Jim. Love it! update soon!
Author's Response: thanks ;-)
Date: July 07, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Red light, Green light
Oh! Red light. So sad for Jim.
Really well done. Just like Pam to run away... she needs some time to think.
Date: July 07, 2007 04:02 pm Title: Red light, Green light
This story continues to be just incredibly lovely. This chapter in particular seemed incredibly real to me for some reason I can't quite explain. I think it's because of Jim - how he acted during S2 - so careful and restrained but everything was right there under the surface the whole time.
Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
always good to feel real. Thanks for the insight.
Date: July 07, 2007 03:41 pm Title: Red light, Green light
Lovely moment- I wish things like that happened in my kitchen ;).
Author's Response: haha me too ;-)
Date: July 07, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Red light, Green light
Oh, hurry and post the next chapter! I can't wait to see what Mark has to say to Pam and what happens when she comes back inside! I presume it can't be long because if the whole city is shut down, she sure can't go for a walk!
Author's Response: hope the next chapter was good for you! chapter seven will be up soon I think. Let me know how you like it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2007 11:54 am Title: Red light, Green light
Ahhhh! What a great chapter (and story)! I can't wait to read the rest of it. I'm always excited when I see a new chapter or story by you; you're one of the best.
Author's Response: OMG thank you. That is so nice. Please keep reading and reviewing! I love it ;-)
Date: July 07, 2007 10:42 am Title: Red light, Green light
This story makes me unbelievably happy. im sitting on my lunch break at work and this right here will get me through the next four hours. So thank you.
Author's Response: you're welcome, glad I can help you get through the day
Date: July 07, 2007 10:23 am Title: Red light, Green light
argh!!!!! i am so frustrated after this chapter. i know that Jim's just trying to be a nice guy, but KISS HER ALREADY! and Mark? worst. timing. EVER. but i can see that this is going someplace good? i hope. b/c it has great potential and it's such a great story. it's a good thing that i'm frustrated. it means you've captured the Jim and Pam that i know and love and i'm emotionally invested. great job!
Author's Response: haha. I love your reviews, so heartfelt and awesome. I hope you're still enjoying it. Let me know.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2007 10:14 am Title: Red light, Green light
MY heart was pounding just reading this. I swear your imagery is perfect - it's like I can smell the toothpaste and soap and I can see the snow outside - it's just perfect. I can't wait to see where this is going. More, soon, please!!! And you know, since today is 7/7/07 I think you should post chapters 6 AND 7 - to, you know, celebrate! LOL!
Author's Response: haha...clearly that didn't happen. Hopefully chapter 7 will be up by the weekend. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Happy I can make your heart pound ;-)