10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 10:09 pm Title: New and different.
Oh I loved it. All of the raw emotion was so well written. i'm just utterly blown away by you.
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 10:01 pm Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
I mean how do you right this?!?!?!? I'm absolutely in love with it. The porch scene I mean WOW!. :D I'm sad a didn't read this when you first published it.
Date: June 13, 2008 09:42 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
“You let me know when you’ve thought things through…” he whispered. And just like that he was gone, closing the door behind him in case she needed a second.
I can't truly express how amazing this story is.
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 09:27 pm Title: Red light, Green light
“Don’t…” he replied, his voice deep and thick with the way that her chest heaved and the way that she was so small in front of him. He meant to say “Don’t worry about it,” or maybe “Don’t, it’s fine,” and step away from her…but instead the one word just hung in the air between them and he didn’t move …for some reason he couldn’t move. He reached around her and set down the bowls, leaving his hand braced against the counter so that his arms were stretched out on both sides of her, trapping her in front of him without any escape…Not that she wanted to escape. Her hands landed instinctively against his chest and sort of drifted there, exploring the way that his heart was pounding beneath the white of his shirt, and the way that he was emanating that special kind of heat that made her stomach twist. Her brow furrowed with a vague feeling of confusion that lingered in the back of her mind, but it went ignored because she was far too distracted by other things. He inhaled audibly and his hands slid closer together on the counter so that he was almost embracing her. He leaned back and glanced down at where her hands rested on his shirt, and then looked back up at her, meeting her hazy stare with one of his own. He bent down toward her. “Where’s your engagement ring?” He planted the whisper almost directly into her ear and her head tipped to let his breath fan there.
^oh. my. gosh. You are officially officially my favorite author. I mean you were officially my favorite author after How it Falls and DEFINITELY after I just want to be famous. but I mean this story takes it. You are an absoultely amazing author.
Date: June 13, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Delicate and Fragile
amazing. Absolutely amazing. I could just picture nervous Jim in the kitchen. Fantastic descriptions
Date: June 13, 2008 06:49 pm Title: Burn and beat
I love this already
Date: June 01, 2008 06:09 pm Title: Stories and Pam
The whole story was just... awesome! Beyond words! And your poetry on this one blew me away! Every time I read a story of yours I decide its the best Jim-and-Pam story ever, but this is really THE ONE! The story was so well told-- and the poems turned it into a masterwork. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 08:30 am Title: Stories and Pam
Superb - you do insensity like no-one else. I love your writing.
10 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2008 08:28 pm Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
Stablergirl, since I love "Famous" so much and since I am relatively new to fanfic, I'm going back and reading some of your older stories and can I just say this line made me laugh out loud probably more than any line in any other thing I've ever read. Ever. The closest any of them had ever come was when Darryl had announced that he wanted to “bang whoever made the pie…” Needless to say, Pam had not taken the credit. Don't know why it struck me as so funny, but I absolutely loved it. Now, I will be back with more reviews later, but I just wanted to get that off my chest.
Date: March 26, 2008 02:02 pm Title: Stories and Pam
Absolutely awesome story! I love how for once, Pam attacked Roy...it was very well written and I will be reading more of your work!
Date: March 25, 2008 10:23 am Title: Delicate and Fragile
I love this story already! "The Holy Grail" still has me laughing! Thank you so much for entertaining me right now. For once, I love sick days now that I can just read fanfics like this all day!
Date: November 30, 2007 11:12 am Title: Stories and Pam
Good stuff, well done - i look forward to reading more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! And thanks for reading!
Date: November 23, 2007 02:43 am Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
I love Jim attacking Pam and then realizing well that he is Jim and Jim would not attack Pam. I also liked the idea of the sweatshirt and how they both knew it had significance.
Author's Response: ah yes the sweatshirt ;-) who doesn't love wearing a significant other's piece of clothing, am I right?? Thanks for the review!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 07:16 am Title: Stories and Pam
i want to say this. wow. seriously. everything about this is great. i had attempted to read this back when it was first completed, but to be honest, the format didn't do much for me. i didn't get past the first chapter. but. for whatever reason, my heart was more open or something, and i fell wildly in love with this. your pam and jim were perfect. scared, uninhibited, cautious, adorable - they really wandered around the spectrum of emotions but all of your choices were amazing and spot on. plus, your mark was perfect!! i have never seen mark written like that, people usually write him as a mary sue which doesn't work for me. and your roy was great too, when lots of people just really reduce him in so many ways. also, i would be remiss if i didn't mention how friggin hot this story was. wow. i am very impressed. kudos :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Yeah you're not alone on your opinion about the format, even I am not that crazy about it, but at the time it was the direction that my creative juices were flowing, so to speak. ;-) Glad you gave it another go and ended up liking it so much! I so enjoyed writing Mark in this one, def my favorite part of the story (aside from the steamy romance) Thank you so much for the review I really appreciate it and I'm really glad you took the time to read.
Date: September 23, 2007 01:26 am Title: Stories and Pam
I am completely enamored of this story. And of Mark. As much a fan as I am of Jim and Pam, I loved Mark in this story. Nice representation.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Mark too ;-)
Date: July 31, 2007 12:45 pm Title: Stories and Pam
Oh wow. Just wow. This was absolutely amazing -- beautiful, simply beautiful.
Wow. I'm really...lost for words here. Excellent, excellent work....
Author's Response: thank you, and thanks for reading and leaving a review at every chapter! You brightened my day ;-)
Date: July 31, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Mom and Muhammad Ali
Okay, I'm having such a ball reading this and OMG PAM!! How could you possibly be thinking about food when you're in Jim Halpert's bed?!?
Jesus. You've reduced me to a squeeing lunatic. :o)
Author's Response: haha I know. food, Jim...Jim, food...clearly Jim. lol oh well.
Date: July 31, 2007 12:25 pm Title: New and different.
Whoa. You weren't kidding when you said this was intense...
Author's Response: yeah...you should've seen it before I sent it to brokenloon for beta-ing. Even worse... He basically told me nobody would keep reading if I left it the way it was lol.
Date: July 31, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
We are moving along, INDEED. So this just keeps getting hotter and hotter.... Love the atmosphere you create here; it's so real and easy to imagine and...guh. I should say something more coherent, but I have GOT to get to the next chapter....
Author's Response: lol coherence is not necessary. read on.
Date: July 31, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
Holy mother of GOD, woman. Jesus. Intense and sexy and OMG. I think I need a moment....
And Mark is still cracking me up, BTW. :o)
Gotta get to the next chapter....
Author's Response: LOL your comments are cracking me up!
Date: July 31, 2007 11:57 am Title: Red light, Green light
Good god. I'm finally breathing again. Holy hell, woman, that scene in the kitchen was HOT. Wow. *fans self*
Next chapter...
Author's Response: see? me and kitchens and Jim...I don't know, I just can't get enough...
Date: July 31, 2007 11:46 am Title: Delicate and Fragile
I feel like my reviews are getting ridiculously redundant at this point, but...wow. Love your Mark, BTW -- laughed out loud!
This continues to be amazing....
Author's Response:
yeah Mark is my boy after this story! I was so surprised once it was done how much he was really a part of everything!
Date: July 31, 2007 11:39 am Title: Intricate lace
God, just continues to be beautifully written; seriously, much of your prose reads like poetry. Amazing!
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: July 31, 2007 11:28 am Title: Stillness and Snow
Okay, is it wrong that I find the image of Jim Halpert doing dishes to be delicious? Okay, thought so. :o)
This is really interesting -- I'm hooked!
Author's Response: haha I know, I have such a thing with Jim and domesticity...I find it really attractive. Sick, I know.
Date: July 31, 2007 11:22 am Title: Burn and beat
So I'm just now catching up on the fics I wasn't able to read before, and this....? WOW. You have an amazing, completely intriguing writing style, and the premise here is absolutely fascinating.
Must get to the next chapter....
Author's Response: lol wow thank you!! I'm so excited that you're reading my story! Please keep letting me know what you think, I'd love some feedback from you.