I'm interested to see where this goes. I'm a guy that plays the guitar, and sometimes, the guitar can get you a lot of attention. I really enjoyed reading the first chapter, but I have two concerns. 1. I don't think Jim would say "Oh...well..um" as much as he did. He always seems to be quick on his toes, but you never know. Maybe he gained his self-confidence later in life. 2. I read in the description that this story gets steamy. I really don't like smut that much, but if that's where you want to take the story, that's ok. Just letting you know what I'm thinking. Anyways, I think the story is off to a great start, and I'll be checking in for updates. Nice work! :)

Author's Response:

Perhaps it is the guitar that gives him more self-confidence?? No, I don't know. I've just always pictured Jim as one of those guys that became increasingly more suave as he aged (I mean, given the yearbook picture and all ;) Haha)
I usually put the "steamy" in the description irregardless because one way or another that's always where my mind takes me. I have a dirty mind sometimes...so far though, there isn't any smut written in the immediate future. I can't make promises for later though (hence the warning in the story descriptions). 

And the bits about the girls flocking to male guitar player definitely comes from my experience in college. I swear, every single guy I ever had a thing for played some kind of guitar and as a freshman I always saw the girls flocking to the guys who played an instrument. :) Haha

Thanks for your comment! 

This was excellent, i love how you made jim kind of self-concious but cool at the same time. it was a perfect blend, and very cute :P