10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2010 04:09 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
wow... SOOOO hot! Need to cool down! You do a GREAT job with this!
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 06:29 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
wow, captured EVERY essence of that photo in my opinion... Excellent writing, made me twist and turn at every gesture... I liked it alot!!! More please.
Date: June 30, 2007 07:09 am Title: Billiards at the Country Club
i think you did a fabulous job in caputring the essence of the photo. and that is one hot photo.
Date: June 25, 2007 09:33 am Title: Billiards at the Country Club
Mmm... that picture and this fic... they're a beautiful thing. I was hoping someone would do this and I'm SO glad you did! I'm also glad it's not RPF.
(eighthcloud on TWoP)
Date: June 24, 2007 12:34 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
hahah the photo. Yesssssss.oh oh wait I like the one of him jumping yeah nice view of.... ok I'm just gonna blush. Great smut fic. You should do one for every picture in the GQ spread. That would be awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2007 07:57 am Title: Billiards at the Country Club
I haven't been in my usual crazy, smut-reading mood lately, but I thought this one was really nicely done. :-) And yeah, that photo should just spontaneously combust - it's that hot.
Author's Response: Aw, even though you aren't in a smutty mood, I'm glad that you still enjoyed it! :) Thank you!!
Date: June 23, 2007 10:55 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
HOT!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: June 23, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
I should start hanging out in country clubs more often. Damn, this was hot. Great detail and I love their new version of the game, haha. I thought it was great how in the fanfic you described how Jon was standing in the picture. You made a story up from the picture, but in the...8th paragraph you also described exactly what he was doing in the picture. That really brought the picture to life, I think. I hope I explained that right...
Nice job as always!
Author's Response: I actually don't know if I've ever been to a country club before...so I don't actually know if these things go on. ;) Haha! Thanks for the response!
8 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2007 10:01 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
Yowza! That picture! What a great crotchal region shot. And what a perfectly hot story to accompany the amazingly hot visual. I'll never look at pool balls the same. Or white pants.
Author's Response: Haha! I was trying to figure out what it said in the crossed out part. I kept reading "orotohal" because the line went right through the breaks in the "c". But indeed it is a good...er...shot! :D
Date: June 23, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
Thank you so much for writing this story based on my prompt on TWoP! I am amazed at how quickly you guys can post a great story. I really should just get over my nervousness and write one myself, but you guys all do such a great job! Maybe someday...
Anyway, I'm glad that photo was such an inspiration, ha!
Author's Response:
Thank you for prompting this story!! :D
And you should write one! I find that these sorts of stories are, by far, the most fun to write. :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
This fanfic was AWESOME! A million thanks to you! Keep up the great work!
PS - I also gave you some love on TWOP!
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for the TWoP love too! :D
Date: June 23, 2007 12:40 pm Title: Billiards at the Country Club
I'm so glad you wrote this...it was awesome. I kept picturing it at my country club though, and the billiards room has huge windows overlooking the golf course, so the whole time I was thinking, "wait! someone might be watching guys!!" haha.
I'm thinking about doing a pool table story too...but I dunno...I'm still pondering.
Awesome job though :)
Author's Response:
Haha!! I kept thinking about little ways that I could get them caught while I was writing it (like video cameras, someone just walking in, peering through windows...) but then I decided that it would be way too complicated, so I didn't.
And you should definitely write one! Definitely! :) It was a lot of fun.
Thanks for the comment!!