1 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2023 05:55 am Title: January 19, 2006
I thoroughly enjoyed reading these insights into the tragic Booze Cruise episode. The lawyer jokes and email exchanges were priceless. The only feedback I would give concerns taking care with the dialogue tags and reducing the summary for big scenes. I understand that it's difficult to avoid repetition with that crucial scene in Booze Cruise, but I still thought that some repetition of the events in real-time would be effective for capturing Jim's heartbreak. I am very impressed with all the additional details about Jim's life and Pam as well. The banter was very much in character. Nice on!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 09:02 pm Title: January 9, 2006
oh no.
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 08:34 pm Title: January 19, 2006
Just awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 08:19 pm Title: January 9, 2006
I just started reading this chapter, but I got so excited, I just had to stop to submit a review. Sooo glad to see your new material!!! You and Nomadshan are my absolute favourite fanfic writers. And so far, this update is totally exceeding my expectations. Please keep writing. Love your style!!!