Date: September 13, 2009 10:13 am Title: The Things We Leave Behind
Wow, I loved this story. Very well done.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2008 04:01 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
Wow. That was quite a twist. I love the final two paragraphs!
Date: February 12, 2008 09:31 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
*sniffles* That was such great story-telling! I knew I didn't like Harrison the way you described him, and my heart broke for Jim and later Avery, but it made me smile to know that Jim finally got a son... And I especially loved that last line. =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 11:11 am Title: The Things We Leave Behind
This is a REALLY cool story. The summary paragraphs were very moving and VERY depressing. Great job. I love it!
Date: June 27, 2007 11:36 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
Very epic while being very detailed. I really liked the sadness because it was mixed in with happiness. Nice job!
Date: June 27, 2007 09:58 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
I was having a crappy evening and I read this and it really cheered me up. I'm a sucker for a well-written story, and you have certainly done that.
Date: June 27, 2007 08:56 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
You did a fantastic job of telling a "story." The story flowed wonderfully. What I liked about this story is that you managed to tell an engaging story in ONE chapter that was filled with humor and drama. And the last two chapters I had to read twice to fully grasp how the two were related. BRAVO!
9 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2007 07:33 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
This was wonderful. I think it's so funny that Jim and Pam still call their daughter by individual nicknames 20 years later. It was a little sad but realistic which is refreshing given all the fluff out there lately. I like the fluff but I also like a story I can relate to. Great job!
Date: June 27, 2007 07:23 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
Well, great, my kleenex are in the other room. Nicely done.
Date: June 27, 2007 07:10 pm Title: The Things We Leave Behind
I really liked this! I loved the scope of the story and how you got into little things, like the naming of Avery, while still preserving the epic tone. I also liked that it was a little grittier than we usually read around here, it was very realistic. GO YOU!