8 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2010 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, mush! Sometimes a little mush goes a long way. It's sweet.
Date: March 27, 2008 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! that made me melt into a puddle of gooey syrup. That was incredible and so beautiful for only 55 words! Please write more! I love your style! You should take a shot at writing a longer story; I think you would be spectacular!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you, flonkertonxx. I don't know how you even found this story buried underneath all the newer stuff, but what a treat to receive a new review! I appreciate your confidence in my writing and I did write a longer story.."While She Rocks Their Baby to Sleep" (can't post link for some reason). Maybe one day I'll write another longer one, but for now I'm really just enjoying reading them! Thanks again for the nice review. :-)
Date: July 05, 2007 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done Abigail! I can hear the conversation taking place. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review! I like your story too. :)
Date: July 02, 2007 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
That's very sweet. I'm so glad this challenge has prompted new members to write. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun.
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Made the hairs on my arms stand up!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! :)
Date: July 01, 2007 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I agree with EmilyHalpert. I'm glad this challenge is tempting new writers! This was great. It's something I never would think of happening, but now that I read it, I can totally see it. Great job - I hope you write more in the future! :o)
Author's Response: Thank you! It's so encouraging when seasoned authors like yourself leave nice comments. I can totally see how people get hooked on writing these now!
8 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really lovely and authentic. I confess I'm not much of a fan of the drabble or short-short format, but I really liked what you did with it here: it felt organic, like a real conversation, not forced into a strict word limit. Very nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm touched by your review. I have wanted to put some Jim/Pam words to paper for a while, but have always shied away. This format gave me a push to try it. I hope it doesn't become addicting!
Date: July 01, 2007 07:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this challenege is bringing out first time writers, and all of them are REALLY good. SO good!
Author's Response: Thank you--my very first review ever! :)