10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great dialogue! I'd love to see it in a longer story.
--Strider
Author's Response: Wow! What a treat to receive a review on a story I wrote over 8 months ago! I'm glad you liked it, Strider. The 55-word fics are lots of fun to write.
Date: July 29, 2007 07:27 am Title: Chapter 1
nope, they were never right for each other. simple and to the point good job
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it. I hope we've seen the last of Karen!
Date: July 05, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this! I see we chose the exact same wording when Jim informs Karen he's heading back to Scranton without her. Cool :) I'm going to read your other story now.
Author's Response: I noticed the same thing in your story! Great minds think alike. The 55 Word Challenge was really fun. You should write one!
Date: July 02, 2007 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to find out what went down in NY with these two. I don't know if it went as smoothly as your story, but you never know!
Author's Response:
I don't know either, but poor Jim's been through enough heartache already. I hope Karen bowed out gracefully. Thanks for commenting!
Date: July 02, 2007 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
that is much better than five nights of talking!
Author's Response: LOL! Totally!