Date: July 10, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was good! This was your first attempt at a fanfic? I'm highly impressed. I particularly enjoyed the finesse of this line:
But after the fireside confession and the subsequent talk with his someone else, he was having a harder time convincing himself that all was still okay in his world.
Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is beautifully written. I hope you'll write more on the subject of Jim/Pam soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I keep wanting to, but then I'll get pulled into someone else's story...maybe sometime soon. :-)
6 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, definite difference between comfort and passion. You really get into his head. Well done, and welcome back to the fanfic world.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I keep going back to that moment when Jim and Karen do the chest-butt thing on the beach...something has always felt a little off with them.