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Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 06:18 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh, I didn't know there was a chapter 2! I love that Pam likes to draw Jim so much.

Author's Response: I didn't plan on a second chapter but it happened! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1

I LOOOOVE "Hey There Delilah", and I always thought it would be a song Jim would like.
This is a good story. Short and sweet, and to the point.

Reviewer: GreenDress Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 05:42 am Title: Chapter 2

This is very sweet.  And I never thoughts about it before, but you're right, she would be nervous to show Jim her art, and for just that reason.  Well done!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1

I love that JIm has Plain White T's and Neil Sedaka on his ipod!  I also loved the image of Jim making grilled cheese.

Great first story!

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

awww cute i love how he asked if there was something she wanted to watch--so simple but so adorable

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on your first story!  This was cute - any story that includes Jim, Pam and grilled cheese sandwiches is a winner in my book.  One thing, you might want to change "grill" to "grilled" here: "Jim replied as he flipped over the grill cheese sandwich he was making."

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm off to fix it now! :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2007 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1

That was very cute!  I can understand Pam's feelings about camping.  Would love some more.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOVING Jim's music choices! hehe. This was totally cute!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always read (and love) your stories so that's awesome coming from you!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent first chapter princess.  I chuckled at the Neil Sedaka selection.  Sweet choice.

Author's Response: Thanks, that song just happened to come on my itunes while I was writing!

Reviewer: katiesaysdance Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

very, very sweet. I liked it a lottt

I can really picture Roy saying that about the camping loll. Keep writing! you're great at it.



Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :)

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