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Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 03:44 am Title: Chapter 5

WOW!!!!!!

I was a little scared to stick with this story, but I totally know the real life story you are basing this on.

Can't wait for more!!!!!! 

 



Author's Response: Yeah I felt so terrible for those people when I read about it.  I hope none of them read this and get offended.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 01:07 am Title: Chapter 5

Ooooh I see the light at the end of the tunnel, at least I think I do. All I can do is hope and wait for the next chapter and maybe there will be a happy ending. Great job, again.

Reviewer: spoonfulofsugar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 01:00 am Title: Chapter 1

OH. MY. GOD.

You are literally my favorite person in the world right now. I'm utterly speechless.

And congrats on doing what no other fanfic writer has been able to do: I not only cried, but I read the 2nd half of this story with my jaw on the ground!

I'm hooked. You own me.

Author's Response: Awwwwwwww I think I hear joo. Here is a virtual econmony sized box o' Kleenex  for  you.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 12:39 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm still hanging in there. Hoping that this is like a soap opera where they come back to life. I am totally willing to believe it. But great conversation with Roy.

Author's Response: Sadly, this fic is based on real life, not a soap opera

Reviewer: dudski Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 12:20 am Title: Chapter 5

Keep going!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap.  This is sad.

To quote Dwight: "I don't believe you.  Continue"

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

very interested to see where this is going...

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 3

The story just breaks my heart. But I will keep reading!

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 4

Im following this story very closely. I like it alot. Interested to see where you take it, and where the steamy sex stuff comes in. lol


Author's Response: I hope I can remember exactly what that's  like so as not to disappoint you Dao. ;

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm hanging on your words to not give up hope.  This is just too sad.  You are doing a great job describing Jim's grief.

Author's Response: Thanks...I worry when I write angst that it comes across as too Days of Our Lives.  I wanted to show how Pam's death thows Jim into role reversals with the people around him.

Reviewer: modern Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

i was really enjoying  th story until i found out she died. i absolutely do not like stories like this. ugh.. i feel sick.


Author's Response:

Give me a few more chapters before you stop reading. Hopefully I can redeem myself to you.

Reviewer: Jammer Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Uhh where is the steam??? Why is this rated MA?


Author's Response:

I put MA because death and such is an subject that isn't really appropriate for some readers.  The steam is in the future.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

what is this current obsession with killing Jim and Pam lately... 

I'm very curious 



Author's Response: Mostly because its the Ultimate in Angst I think.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

WAIT WHAT? That's ridiculous. AHHH.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Noooo. Just when things looked really good for them. Is he going to wake up, oh please let him wake up. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Is it wrong given the angstyness of this story that your reference to Dallas has me laughing?? I am sorry to say that there will be a funeral for Pam Beesly in this story. But hopefully, if you stick through it with me you'll end up liking what i do.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is reallygood so far, but.....please don't let her die. I like this story and can definitely see it going good places.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

I will keep reading but really don't handle jim or pam dying very well.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

holy crap. I like it. Keep going.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

what

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Jenny Lewis lol?

This seems a little drastic, but I'm curious to see where you go with it.



Author's Response: I actually based this story on something that really happened.  It was in the news a while back, so I felt comfortable taking the story where I plan to without it being too melodramatic.  At least plotwise.  My writing might spoil it. :)

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