1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2023 07:06 am Title: The Morning After
Very nice
8 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2010 07:06 pm Title: The Interruption
Good first date
Date: August 05, 2007 09:27 am Title: The Morning After
I remember starting this story, so I'm glad I went back to finish reading, because you did a great job with their date. Jim was so sweet e-mailing everyone to come to the show. I love that Pam did a coal walk painting and that Oscar acknowledged her improvement. The second roof date was sweet and romantic. Creed, somewhat oblivious in the morning, was hysterical, as usual.
Love the sweet little moments between them, and the banter. I would certainly agree with Pam that things are looking up!
Date: August 02, 2007 03:26 pm Title: The Morning After
Oooh, I would say that reads like a good end to the first date.
It was a really sweet story. I love FDFs!
Date: August 02, 2007 03:24 pm Title: The Dinner
it better not be hopeless between them. Or else, sadly, my life may be over. Okay, maybe not that dramatic, but not so good.
Aww, that is such a sweet date.
Reading the "swaying isn't dancing" reminded me of a song I wanted to download (swaying)...
"glass jaws" I think you meant glass jars... because glass jaws sounds a bit scary for candles.
Date: August 02, 2007 03:18 pm Title: The Art Show
Jim told everyone... so sweet. And he did come, because I was getting nervous for the first few lines that he wasnt going to show up again. And then I would have to hurt him.
Date: August 02, 2007 03:13 pm Title: The Resignations
" His mocking face continued. "I think I told you yesterday that I would be there at six soooo I'm pretty sure I'll be there at six.""
That seems so Jim :)
Well, all of the lines seem very Pam and Jim, just that one really caught my eye
Date: August 02, 2007 03:11 pm Title: The Interruption
I can only imagine how Pam felt when Jim said Karen, because MY heart sank.
But... it at least seems sort of positive, he is going to her art show.
Date: August 01, 2007 11:12 pm Title: The Interruption
Aw, what a sweet story. I love how after all this time they can still be so shy toward each other, it's very endearing. I love happy JAM stories and this is a great one!
Date: August 01, 2007 10:46 pm Title: The Morning After
That was such a sweet ending. They we're so sweetly happy... Ahhh...
Sleeping on the floor of the office was superb and Creed was great.
Very nice.
Date: August 01, 2007 06:29 pm Title: The Morning After
The date that nobody wants to end. (Excuse me for a minute while I squee!!! Ok, better.)
The second first date was 10 kinds of awesome. And no wonder the girl's legs gave out. Nicely done.
Date: August 01, 2007 06:12 pm Title: The Morning After
Awww Jack and Patty sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g! Well done on the entire story.
9 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2007 05:58 pm Title: The Morning After
I was so excited to see another chapter, and you didn't disappoint. I'm sorry to see it end : )
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2007 05:48 pm Title: The Morning After
aww....I half-expect Jim to come in for an afternoon nap. ;-)
Nice, nice job!
Date: August 01, 2007 05:12 pm Title: The Morning After
Yes, "finally," indeed. :) How wonderfully bizarre is Creed anyway? And yet, he just seems to fit in so perfectly with Jim and Pam (or is it Jack and Patty?)
Nice! [/kevin]
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 08:26 pm Title: The Dinner
Such a sweet chapter. I had forgotten that we had Karen to thank for the note with the yogurt lid medal. So very helpful of her!
Date: July 27, 2007 12:32 pm Title: The Dinner
That's a nice idea for a second first date :) So sweet of Jim... and I'm glad there was a better explanation for why he was late!
Date: July 27, 2007 12:26 pm Title: The Art Show
Jim getting everyone (almost) in the office to go to Pam's art show -- great idea!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 12:23 pm Title: The Resignations
*sigh* So happy :) I loved Michael's reaction to Karen and Ryan leaving -- Traitors! Haha. And I loved Jim's persistence at going to Pam's art show. *happy sigh*
Date: July 27, 2007 12:18 pm Title: The Interruption
Oh my gosh, you nearly gave me a heart attack with that call from Karen!!!! But then you made it all better with the rest... poor Pam to be freaking out like that. Love that he's going to finally go to her art show :) Can't wait to click "Next"!
Date: July 27, 2007 10:16 am Title: The Dinner
This line right here:
"There was just a moment, a quiet little one between them, when Pam felt like it was just the two of them on Earth and everything else ceased to exist. It was comfortable again, friends back together after so long, just the two of them."
Kills me. In the best way possible. :)
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 06:49 am Title: The Dinner
I feel all warm and fuzzy : )
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 06:46 am Title: The Dinner
Yay - I love Lichtenstein, so I knew what piece you meant! :-) And I love that they are back up on the roof...
Good stuff. Very good stuff. :^)
Date: July 26, 2007 10:05 pm Title: The Dinner
So sweet. Your jim and Pam are really nicely written. A good combo of banter and nerves.
Nice work!
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 08:41 pm Title: The Art Show
YES! I am in love with this. It's perfect.
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far!