Date: July 29, 2007 07:29 am Title: The Essence of Mangoes
Wow! That was really good! So many details that flesh out the Beach Games story in a really great way. The pink cardigan, the two piece, Dwight and Angela in the parking lot! Loved it :-)
Author's Response: Thank you, I tried to give some details and back story to how Pam was feeling during the day. I'm a fan of the pink cardigan, so that made its way into Pam's head. Thank you for the review supergirlsudz.
Date: July 29, 2007 03:59 am Title: The Essence of Mangoes
Very well written. Keep going, thiscould get really really good.
Author's Response: Well I hope it does, the next chapter is a really important one, as anyone who has seen the episode knows. Thank you for the review, blueturfbronco. Go Boise State! (I assume).
Date: July 29, 2007 02:20 am Title: The Essence of Mangoes
this is really good! there is more right?
Author's Response: Yes, there is definitely more. Should be two more chapters, maybe three. I haven't decided if I want to do a first-date chapter. Thank you for the nice words and review JamLover101.
Date: July 29, 2007 01:54 am Title: The Essence of Mangoes
I really love this! I love DevilPam! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I love DevilPam as well, she is a lot of fun to write for. Thank you for your review newyorkcares.
Date: July 26, 2007 03:51 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
Hee, yes, even good girls can appreciate a great ass sometimes. Glad there's something they can all agree on! Fun chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Pam was taking her cue from Angel on that one, but that might start to change....
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
Love this! Very creative. So far I'm on Team Devil, however the fact that Angel acknowledged Jim's ass was niiice. I will definately be keeping up with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. As long as no one can see, Angel is cool with stuff.
Date: July 25, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Pam's Problem
Hmm, I think Pam needs to listen more to the devil side! I can't wait for all of the crazy things that are going to happen at the beach!
Author's Response: You will get your wish...kinda. Devil is definitely going to start to have more of an influence on Pam as the day goes on. Thank you for your review.
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
“C’mon Pam. Nobody is behind us, ok? Check out his ass, ‘cause I know I am.” Devil leaned forward and stared.
Pam turned to look at Angel for her response, waiting for the counter-argument.
Angel looked up at her and shrugged. “He’s got a great ass, you might as well, no one will see us.”
Hahaha! This fic is a lot of fun! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes, the end is a bit of foreshadowing for the next chapter, when things continue to skew a little more to Devil. Thank you for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 04:02 pm Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
Oh, brilliant. All of this just brilliance. Dwight loves the ganja! Of COURSE he does, hee! And she was thinking about Easter? Oh, Pam, you do not fool me. I love this so much and it's orginiality and the devil/angel and Pam and just.. everything. I can't wait to see what Pam (and her voices) do on the trip, hehe. I'll quit babbling now but just.. LOVE.. so much love for this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your enthuaism is what helps me to keep writing. Chapter 3 is coming soon hopefully! Thanks for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 03:56 pm Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
This story is full of awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I was hoping to fill it with awesome, and I'm glad that I succeeded.
Date: July 25, 2007 08:18 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
Ooh, I'll just bet Angela is hot for Sean Hannity.
Bonus points for Pam checking out Jim's ass ;o)
Author's Response: Thank you for the bonus points. I definitely see Angela harboring a forbidden and unspoken love for Sean Hannity. She probably has a voodoo doll of Colmes. Thank you for the review!
Date: July 25, 2007 07:53 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
I just love this dichotomy. I forsee Devil convincing Pam she needs a skimpy two piece when they go to the lake.
Author's Response: That is some good foresight. I'm not sure if Devil will convince her directly, but it will definitely be mentioned and commented upon. Thanks for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 07:22 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
This is so adorable, and a very original idea! I can't wait to see what happens at the beach!
Author's Response: The beach should be a combination of humor (hopefully) and some angst. It's also the first chapter to take place during an episode, so there is ready-made material to bounce off Angel and Devil. Thanks for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 07:18 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
I really like this story! It's a fun twist on the whole angel vs. devil thing. Also, it's very funny - I loved the section where Pam went through her various excuses to skip the meeting. Andy playing Enya on his banjo? Priceless. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks. I actually added the list on my last pass through the story, so my finishing touch on this chapter was, in fact, "acute photophobic jellylegitis". Thank you for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 07:09 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
You are doing a really great job, I don't think you need to worry about being new at all! And this?
“I just do!” she squeaked. “I keep up on things, I read the daily news, and check Foxnews.com several times a day…while I’m on my break of course!” Angela’s voice had reached a pitch usually reserved for Kelly and dog whistles.
Was genius.
I love it!!Author's Response: I really enjoy writing Angela because she's one of my favorite characters. In fact, when I'm done this story, and probably 'A Game of Global Domination' I'm going to do a story that revolves around her. Plus, she absolutely watches Fox News, I just know it. Thank you for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 06:42 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
Sassy Beesly : ) Another fun chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, she has to become the Pam that stands and tells Karen that she's not sorry about what she said to Jim we see in "The Job" somehow. Devil and Angel will just provide the push. Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 05:49 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
Bwahahahahaha....think you could provide us with a visual aid for this story? Cuz my mind's eye is working overtime....lol Great chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for the kind words. Well, its only appropriate because Pam's mind is working overtime as well. Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2007 05:13 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
This is really fun, and I'm looking forward to where Pam's little assistants lead her next. Of course, I'm rooting for Devil. ;-)
Author's Response: time4moxie! Sorry, I'm a big fan of yours. I too am rooting for Devil, and I'm pretty sure she's going to start convincing Pam of her point of view on the beach. Thank you for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 03:59 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
What a fun concept - and I'm very impressed with how well you're pulling it off. So different from the show, yet you make it really fit - the ensemble conference room scene especially. Love this: Do you think they have a special word for when something gets stuck in your shoe? Perfect. Really clever - looking forward to more of this.
Author's Response: Thank you. I just reviewed your excellent 'The Real Deal'. Yeah, Angel's words are a bit of foreshadowing for Pam's actions in "The Job.". Thanks for the review.
Date: July 25, 2007 12:52 am Title: Jesus! in the Conference Room
This was just hysterical. I can totally see this conference room scene happening. I love that Pam is starting to get on Devil Pam's side. I also love that Angela called Pam a hussy. Great details on Angela by the way. Oh, and I really love the last part where Angel agrees about checking Jim out. Love it love it love it. I hope to see an update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, I enjoy writing ensemble/Conference Room-esque scenes. It's a lot of fun to just throw everyone together and watch bad/awkward/funny things happen. Thanks for the review.
Date: July 22, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Pam's Problem
this is fantastic story. i love the whole good and bad verison of pam. i really want to read more!
Author's Response: I just finished/published/posted the 4th chapter of 'A Game of Global Domination', so my focus is now on Chapter 2. Expect Karen to get the Angel & Devil once-over. Thank you for your review.
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Pam's Problem
LOVED THIS!!! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. There is more coming!
Date: July 21, 2007 07:28 am Title: Pam's Problem
Hee! This is silly, fun, and absolutely adorable. And, damn, that honey dream!
Author's Response: Thank you kindly for the review. I'm pleased that you liked it.
Date: July 21, 2007 04:20 am Title: Pam's Problem
This is such a fun, cute idea, and really well-executed -- I love that your Devil and Angel aren't exactly the cliches you'd expect them to be, and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yes, there is definite wiggle-room in the spheres that Devil and Angel make up. They can agree on things, and may surprise Pam in what they say or suggest. Thank you for the review.
Date: July 20, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Pam's Problem
Ok, I was laughing out loud and my family thinks I'm crazy. Do I ever love Devil! This is a terrific story. And no, it's not hard to follow at all. Great job and I can't wait until the next chapter is up.
Author's Response: I'm glad that it wasn't hard to follow along to. Also, thank you very much for the positive review. I hate to admit it, but it helps me want to write more. Sad I know, I'm like Michael. Devil is a lot of fun, she's been repressed for a long time with Pam, I think. Thanks for the review!