1 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2021 07:03 pm Title: Good Girls Don't
This was fun! You captured Jim so perfectly.
Also, have I said how amazing you are at getting their banter just right? So cute and hilarious!
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
i love love loved this! so in character with every person and i was laughing out loud.
i wish they wouldve posed though - woulda liked to see jims reaction to the pic ;)
Date: September 14, 2007 08:41 am Title: Good Girls Don't
Hmmm, now I want to know more about the lawsuit!
Date: September 07, 2007 04:21 pm Title: Good Girls Don't
Oh Moxie, way to be sneaking. I am shocked Angela signed...or she only did after the announcement. Jim & Pam are too cute with their VS related banter. Love Todd Packer getting caught. Oh and great job with the Toby/Michael dynamic. They hate was very well done.
Date: September 07, 2007 08:19 am Title: Good Girls Don't
Angela and a cat photo! And then... hairy Schrute women.
Congratulations. I already have a weird habit of connecting TO to my school courses. However, with that mention of partner swapping, you have done the near impossible - connected it with Organic Chemistry. So, now the tally is - Office is related to Organic, Animal Behavior, Analytical.... and perhaps the strangest.... Suicide. What does my mind do? Really, I don't even want to know how that happens.
It was cancelled.... wow... poor Kevin.
Todd Packer was totally my first thought!
Okay, so when I first read this title, I had no idea what the story was about, but now that I read it, I totally enjoyed it. And now I have to hurry to get ready for class (phsyiology... haven't managed to connect that with the office yet)
Date: September 07, 2007 07:58 am Title: Walk on the Wild Side
So random and minor - but you can make the word gravelly work. I wanted to use it in a story and it just sounded weird. But here, it works. Oh well.
Yeah Jim.... its bad with Pam when you willingly want to subject yourself to a Michael/Ryan call.
Oh, since this review is already a "see you are a great writer because of blank" review, I figure I will add this. Normally, I can't totally see Jim and Pam being this honest and talking with each other, but somehow it works here. See... darn you. Too good!
I can see both Jim's point of not wanting to tell her what to do, and Pam's point of saying he can like give his opinion. It seems like I have a real life reference of that somewhere up in my head, but I can't think of it.
I don't think many people would complain if Jim (or John) posed in Playgirl...
Date: September 07, 2007 07:45 am Title: I Want You to Want Me
Good Michael/Pam scenes make me happy.... me happy. And Pam is smart and sees the parallels sorta. Yay. Smart Pammy.
Haha, Angela is slightly considering it.
It is a special talent of theirs - joking instead of talking.
:(. It ends on a sad note.
Date: September 07, 2007 07:30 am Title: Hot Child in the City
It would be tough for Jim... wanting to support her, but not at all wanting her to do that. I don't think I would want that either (ya know.. if i was a guy... although as a girl, i am like, yeah, wouldn't do that no way no how)
"Nudity wasn't something that offended him, especially not hers." Haha! That made me laugh!
Toby would probably.... well, I could imagine he would want to see Pam in playboy, but then instantly feel guilty about it.
Wow, that is.... that is a lot of money. Holy crap! That is more than I paid for all FOUR years of college. WOW.
Date: September 07, 2007 07:23 am Title: Let's Get It On
Yes, there would be a Kevin giggle at that announcement wouldn't there be. I laughed just thinking about it. All the guys reactions were spot on.
It is interesting twist that Michael is opposed, but Toby supports. At first I was like, Really? But I sort of see it.
"and telling the women to take off all their clothes. That's my job.”" So michael!
I love Phyllis's reaction - so totally in character for her!
The new Pam IS 30% more unpredictable!
ew. having sex with dwight. see, that sort of thing isn't even on any list of mine, because i refuse to believe that that even exists. gross!
Date: September 07, 2007 05:41 am Title: Behind Closed Doors
its marked as complete yay!
*giggled* it makes me happy that Pam and Jim arrived together.
Such a cute little IM conversation.
Oh, Karen isn't a woman.... hmm... I bet Karen didn't know that!
Wow, a Playboy/DM crossover thing.... wow...
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 02:27 am Title: Good Girls Don't
This chapter just might contain one of my favorite Dwight talking heads of all time. This is a great, fun way to end this story :)
Date: September 05, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Good Girls Don't
Can I admit I'm kind of glad Pam didn't get a chance to pose? And as long as Jim got his own private VS fashion show, it's all good. This most definitely did not disappoint, Miss Mox. I smiled all the way through.
Date: September 05, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Good Girls Don't
What a great ending! That Angela can be pretty sly!
Thanks for a fun and thought-provoking story!
Date: September 05, 2007 07:55 pm Title: Good Girls Don't
SHARPIE!!! ARGH!
Seriously, I love you, Moxie. Pam + Jim + pink shopping bag = WIN!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Good Girls Don't
Well now I'm totally curious about the lawsuit. Go Angela! I've always suspected she's a bit of an exhibitionist. It's always the quiet ones.
Date: August 15, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Awww...I'm glad they were able to compromise. Now...what will Angela do?? Great Creed line in there with the nudity...of course. Can't wait to read more! (I've been spoiled in being behind because I can read to much at once.)
Date: August 15, 2007 05:05 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
=( Now I think I am more sad for Pam. Great reasoning with Michael...very believeable that he would think like that. And great line about Michael, Phyliss, and maracas. Very Michael.
Date: August 15, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Wow...this whole thing really leads to some uncomfortable coversations. I feel so bad for Jim because that would just be so...weird for him. I wonder what Jan will say...
Date: August 15, 2007 04:39 pm Title: Let's Get It On
Hum...I'm thinking Jim's wrong and that Pam is going to do it. You have me very intrigued.
Date: August 15, 2007 04:34 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
Wow...very interesting concept....I never would have guessed that's who Samantha is. (I was thinking more, to try and get them to dress more fasionably or something). While I hope they don't have the documentary actually show on the show soon, I love stories where it has because it's so different, but still the same, as the show. I hope you understand what I mean by that.
Date: August 13, 2007 08:50 am Title: Walk on the Wild Side
I really like how you've created a serious situation/roadblock/disagreement in their relationshipb ut the best part is your solution here. I love how it is not all happy and perfect, they disagree and struggle to discuss it, but deal and compromise well. Frankly it is a really great compromise.
Date: August 10, 2007 10:09 am Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Woohoo Pam! Now she just has to convince Angela. She's on a roll. I think she can do it.
I love Jim's guilt as claiming Pam as "his". So sweet and old-fashioned. But just as fun was how quickly he got over it with the prospect of lingerie sessions! HA!
Date: August 09, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Great as usual. You should write for the show! I relly mean that!
B
Date: August 09, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Great as usual. You should write for the show! I relly mean that!
B
Date: August 09, 2007 02:31 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
I love this story more with every chapter. I love how you are writing Jim. He's so careful and hesitant with Pam. He just so...Jim!
Can't wait for more!