Date: August 04, 2007 12:18 pm Title: Positive
I liked Jan and Michael together so much until they turned her into a kinky psychopath. I hope they back off that a little now that she is living with Michael and doesn't have to deal with the corporate BS.
And I wouldn't be surprised if Jan got pregnant this season. We speculated on it last season, but I think it's more probable now that she's living with Michael. She got what she wanted with her boob job. Maybe she'll use a pregnancy to get Michael to marry her.
Author's Response:
Oh, good heavens. It never occurred to me that pregnancy gives you even bigger boobs. Michael will lose what little mind he has...!
Thanks for reading, EH.
Date: August 04, 2007 08:41 am Title: Positive
Aww. I love it. And I'm pretty sure Michael's response would be to do some kind of touchdown dance to celebrate his virility. ;)
Author's Response: Yes! He would do a touchdown dance, probably involving a lot of pelvic thrusting and other inappropriate gestures. Awesome. Thanks, invis.
Date: August 03, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Positive
Aw. This premise sort of galvanizes Jan's whole thing with Michael - having all these doubts about him even as there's just something about him that draws her to him. Nice portrait of her insecurities about him too. And the image of Michael fishing is too funny (I have images of him fly fishing and getting all tangle up when he casts.) This makes me really look forward to seeing Jan/Michael in S4.
Author's Response: Thanks, colette! Yeah, Michael with a fish hook would be not only awkward but downright dangerous. :) But I can also see his children learning to love their idiot but loving father. JaMichael may not be the train wreck I think it is.
Date: August 03, 2007 06:04 pm Title: Positive
Ooooo. Really nicely done. I love her anxiety, yet it isn't like her to wait for a 'better time' so she just goes for it. Very fitting. And Michael asking if she fell in... so him.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Michael is not the most tactful guy in the world!
9 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Positive
I love that Jan is worried that Michael won't be able to teach their child anything. So hilarious!
But beyond that, great job at capturing the fear and anxiety of the moment for Jan! I wish we had more Jan and Michael stories. (what's the collective name for them, anyway? Jamaica? *snort*)
Author's Response: *blink* Wow. I don't think I've actually closed the document window from cutting and pasting this story, and you've already posted a review? You must be faster than 99% of all snakes, Cuz! I also wish we had more JaMichael stories. She's a very intriguing character, and much easier to write than Michael! Thanks for reading.