1 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2020 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
"I’m having a really good day, so if you have any hostile thoughts you want to share, maybe you can save it for, like, my fourth date with Jim?”
This line alone was worth the price of entry.
I don't know. I just really liked this - seeing Jim's development and his feelings for Pam through a different set of eyes.
Date: August 05, 2007 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
You sure this is complete?? I like this Ellie - I think you could do more with this! I like that she doesn't like Pam and how protective she is of Jim. And I love this:
In college, she went to Smith and had sex with a lot of girls. He went to Penn State and wished he had sex with a lot of girls.
Author's Response: You know, there might be more Ellie on the horizon; I am trying to work her in to some ideas - stay tuned. And thanks for the review!
Date: August 05, 2007 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story! It's so nice to read a story about a friend of Jim's who's actually interesting. And Ellie is fun and fascinating, and charming and odd enough to seem like she could actually hold Jim's interest as a friend.
Also, I dig your username -- I used to work for EL. Hope to read more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review... "Emily's List" started as my penname when I was writing West Wing fic, but I'm also just a fan of them - I've worked with them or in conjunction with them, and I'm such a fan!rnrnI really appreciate what you said about Ellie. I fought myself to not make her MarySue - and glad it worked. Thanks!