1 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2020 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Kelly voice* First of all, how dare you.
No, seriously. This one hurts just because it's so powerful. Even knowing that this is not at all what actually happened.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think this one works because it’s so abrupt. And was still possible when it was written, which was scary.
Date: August 11, 2008 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, NO! That's so sad!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that! I don't think this will happen, at all, but if it does I like knowing that Pam is strong enough to get through it. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
Date: May 26, 2008 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Wait, she breaks up with Jim in this one? That's so sad!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not exactly sure where that came from, but sometimes I get a little angsty. Sorry about the sadness- thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
10 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh no! I mean, very well written and powerful, but all the more heartbreaking for that!
--Strider
Author's Response: Thank you. This one was sort of a downer, huh? :) Believe me, I'm usually all about the fluff!
Date: August 09, 2007 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know I will not be able to handle it if something like this happens for real (in the fictional TV show I am obsessed with). Your story is beautiful written and painfully understood. I'm glad I read it :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you did, too! Thank you so much. Yes, it is pretty painful to think about, but if it makes you feel any better I don't think this is how it will end. I really don't. Thanks again!
Date: August 08, 2007 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1
nqllisi!!!!
Are you trying to kill me?! Seriously. I expect more from you. ;-)
I'm not even going to let myself dwell on the fact that it's quite a moving image. (no pun intended.) And of course, well written. Instead I will be just pouty for your attempt at turning my universe inside out. :-P
Author's Response: Yep, the 50+ pieces of fluff were just to lull you into a false sense of security. Hee. As penance, I've posted some fluff today, as well. Thanks for finding this good enough to pout over! (And thank you for finding some redeeming qualities!).
8 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK - just who are you and what have you done with Lis? Posting such a well written but totally angsty story under someone else's name just isn't nice. Lis would never write anything to break my heart in 55 words or less.. Just kidding, it was awesome, as yours always are!
Author's Response: You caught me! I'm actually my evil twin. Hee. Sorry! Fluff coming soon (and thank you, thank you as usual!).
Date: August 07, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. What are you saying? They don't live happily ever after?! What's wrong with you? And the universe?!
Author's Response: I told you I wasn't feeling well today! Hee. Sorry, sorry. I'll write fluff soon, I promise!
Date: August 07, 2007 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This broke my heart, BUT....I love that Pam's eyes were dry. I love strong Pam!!! Wonderful work:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love strong Pam, too. I think that she knows when to hold 'em and when to fold 'em at this stage of her life, and she also knows that she'll survive. Sorry about your heart, though!
Date: August 07, 2007 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Dangit, lis! Didn't you see that there is an embargo on Future Angst? I think you owe us some fluff.
(PS, I'm only grumpy because this was so well-written. Don't rain on my Jam-parade....)
Author's Response:
Sorry, sorry! I'm a little glad it struck a nerve, but I didn't mean to upset people. Hee. Thank you- I'll get right on that fluff.
Date: August 07, 2007 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Ouch! This hurts so much. What an incredibly written story with so few words.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Do you need a band-aid? Some Advil? (Sorry about the ouchies!)
Date: August 07, 2007 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Break my heart, why don't you? No one who writes as succinctly and powerfully as you should be allowed to do this - because it makes the idea too hard to dismiss! Well, now that you've purged yourself, I'm looking forward to whatever's next (ahem, think: together.) Well done - there I said it.
Author's Response: Thanks? Hee. Sorry about your heart! I know, it wasn't very nice, but I think I have it out of my system. Something "together" next seems right in order (actually, I have an idea for the Kandy 55 word challenge, but then some good Jammy fluff!). Thanks as usual!
9 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2007 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Ahem. Lis? I thought we had a little agreement here. You are supposed to make me feel hopeful and happy - not make me sad. I mean honestly.
LOL! But since you went ahead and went against our contract - I'll tell you that you amaze me with how you can put so much out there with so few words. I'm hoping you'll use your powers for good instead of evil next time.
(I'm sure you understand I am kidding. You know I adore you.)
Author's Response:
Hee, I am sorry. I'll be good, I promise! I did sort of stray from my norm here, didn't I? Thank you, as usual, for the praise (even in the midst of your sorrow!). The adoration is certainly mutual!!
Date: August 07, 2007 06:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Nooooo! Beautifully written, well done, but so, so wrong!
Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry. I neither want this nor believe it will happen- but sometimes I get nervous and it helps to get it out on paper. Thank you!
Date: August 07, 2007 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was hard to read, but so well done. You're very good at packing a lot of punch in few words.
Author's Response: I do love the 55 word format. Thank you so very much. Sorry about the angst this early in the morning!
Date: August 07, 2007 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaah! Once again, so well done, but what a zinger!
Author's Response: Sorry! I woke up with it in my head and needed to exorcise it before I could get on with my day. I'm glad you got something out of it despite the zinger. Thank you!
Date: August 07, 2007 05:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I, for one, DON'T hate you, nqllisi! I mean, were these 55 of the hardest words to read? Sure. But they were so well written, I just couldn't find myself being mad. :) So good job!
Just don't do it again... :P
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad to hear that I avoided the hate! I very rarely go to the angst well, so you have little to fear. I'm glad you enjoyed it despite the downer ending. Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2007 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1
no! no! no! i hate you. i was like, okay, a quick story before i do important things like get out of my pajamas. and no no no! now guess what is going to be occupying my thoughts all day. evil you.
(oh yeah there is the its really good and well written and all that good stuff). but i am sticking with no!
Author's Response: