1 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2023 01:34 am Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
Extremely funny! felt like the show itself!
Date: August 11, 2007 11:42 pm Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
Angela's middle name is Noel, not Grace. Otherwise, VERY cute story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the correction. I wasn't sure if it was Noel, or Noelle (which I read on Wikipedia - which we know is the ONLY place to get the best information, ever, right?) so I changed it to the latter. I'm glad you pointed this out because I did know this, but I forgot. I can't believe no one else caught it (or said anything ;)
Thank you for the nice review!!
8 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
Great job with this! I especially liked Karen's announcement to the office - and Creed wanting to get with the "lesbian". Very entertaining and everyone sounded so real.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm kind of curious what Karen's going to say. While I don't think she's going to totally freak out, I definitely thought that she would say something, because -- hello, long-suffering girlfriend here. I do actually feel bad for her. Because we know Jim never had his heart in it. Anyway, thanks for the nice review.
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 09:23 am Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
Wonderful! You wrote everyone in the ensemble very believably, and there were so many great lines. Andy's "I watch Animal Planet a lot," Dwight's revelation that proposing is different from fighting Cylons (LOL!), Michael pronouncing Dwight and Angela's relationship "gross." It was all great. I enjoyed it quite heartily. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you found the characters to be believable. It's funny when you're trying to think up the things that everyone would say, y'know? I think when Michael finds out about Angela & Dwight, he will definitely think it's gross. Because, really. Does anyone want to imagine Dwight in a relationship? (Except for us sick, twisted Office fans?)
Date: August 11, 2007 08:11 am Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
Nice story. It was great you incorporated so many couples in there.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the office romances can get a little confusing to manage, but I did the best I could. I think Dwight & Angela are especially amusing and I love when we get to see them on the show. They're so ... weird. Hehe.
9 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 07:33 am Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
That was so much fun!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: August 11, 2007 02:33 am Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
Wow, that was really well written. You had some great lines in there and the voices were great. Too bad it seems like it's over. I'd keep it up though.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I don't plan on continuing it, but I'm sure there will be other stories I'll have to write once the season starts up again...
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 02:26 am Title: Secrets, secrets are no fun; Secrets, secrets hurt someone
excellent! you got so many of the characterization spot on: esp. Andy.
Also:"That is what I'm here for," Michael continued. "I mean, if it wasn't for my moral support, half of these people would be dead by now. From depression. And hopelessness.
i totally lollerskated all over that one!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! I really enjoy Andy. I can't wait to see more of him in the upcoming season. And Michael. You know Michael really thinks he is the glue that holds the office together. Heh.