Date: August 16, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
I love that she wears the fashion show outfit! Loved it!
Date: August 16, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
AWESOME, SB, seriously. I loved every bit of this last chapter. Perfection. Please write more!!!
Date: August 15, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
Beautiful scrantonbranch! And so the receptionist saves Jim :)
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 09:24 am Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
And the old Jim and the new Pam have arrived at their destination of common ground. Well done, SB! I liked a lot of lines in this Chapter, this is one of them: What’s more, she helped him see he didn’t need to fear the man who loved her
This is exactly what happened!
I also love all the 'silent' communication.
Date: August 15, 2007 09:06 am Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
SB, I jumped up and down when I saw that you had written a fanfic! I have so much enjoyed your work on the JP and PD that I knew this would be good.
Nobody gets in the heads of these two like you do (except maybe the writers!). I was glad to see that you have brought back the non-verbal communication that they were so good at. You have stayed true to their characters - their few words meaning so much. I actually teared up reading this. I also loved that Jim still had a "paradox".
What a great read! I hope you find time to do more.
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting
Oh, how cute. They were both ten minutes early and only moments away from each other. I also thought it was a nice touch that they both pulled out a sentimental token to pass the time.
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
SB, I really like the similarities and the contrast that you showed in Jim and Pam getting ready for the date. It's so appropriate that you named this Chapter "Mirrors", because although they are doing pretty much the same thing and thinking pretty much the same things, they're images are reversed. One is returning to his old self while the other is exploring her newself. I love that!
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 06:49 am Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
SB, I have goosebumps and butterflies in my stomach after reading that. Perfection! Again, your insight into Pam and Jim's heads comes through crystal clear in your fanfic. I hope you will write more!
Date: August 14, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
That was gorgeous, sb! What a way you have with language.
I especially enjoyed this part:
The door opened to reveal a radiant Pam standing before Jim. She was beautiful everyday, but this moment literally knocked the breath right out of him. A smile snuck out of the corner of his mouth to accompany his awe filled eyes. He relished the freedom of being able to look at her freely without wondering if she can see into his soul. His eyes literally invited Pam to read every page of his feelings for her.
*sigh*
Thanks for an amazing story.
8 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
First, congrats on your first fic! I just loved it, being able to see what they were each thinking as they went through the same steps getting ready for their first date. And these lines were my absolute favorite:
"The man he felt return in Wallace’s office was staring back at him in the mirror. It felt good to be back."
"A vibrant and confident woman stared back at her, a woman who was courageous enough to wear red."
Date: August 12, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: Waiting
I love it, sb!
Looking forward to see what this means: Tonight was her chance to love him the way he loved her. ;-)
Date: August 11, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
Yay scrantonbranch, this is great!! I'm looking forward to seeing how you finish the story!!!
Date: August 11, 2007 10:09 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting
yay sb! i'm so glad you're doing this! it's really good. since this one is only 3 chapters, will you maybe do more?
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 09:25 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting
Another excellent chapter. In the last year, their relationship had been a collage of miscommunication, cold shoulders and pain. Isn't it the truth! Can't wait for part 3.
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
Yay scrantonbranch! This was beautifully written and your insight into Jim and Pam just shines through in your fiction! I'm off to go read chapter 2!
9 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 07:03 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting
Great job. I read it with a smile. Looking forward to the next installment.