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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

So interesting, pamcasso, and more than a bit heart-breaking as well!  Good job.

Reviewer: Abigail Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter, pamcasso.  I am so glad you wrote Pam's POV from that night too.  You made me feel so sad.  Poor Pam.  Poor Jim. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice review Abigail. I'm glad I could make you feel sad :)

 

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh PW Pam. There is just so much I need to warn you about. And yet, tragically, I cannot.

You captured Pam very nicely here. 

More please!



Author's Response: More, really? Yikes, I will try. Thanks muchly for the review Beeswax!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  Jim. You need help!

Good work, pamcasso!



Author's Response: Thanks Beeswax!

Reviewer: Abigail Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very powerful and well-written.  So heartbreaking too.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review!!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have thought it might be this way between Karen & Jim with her misinterpreting his ardor.  You write it well.



Author's Response:

Thank you muchly for reading and reviewing :)

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