10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2010 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Karen. She can't stop the train that is Jim and Pam's love. She ended up just being collateral damage. Great description of how she felt. I could feel her pain.
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
your pen name caught my attention (spuffy forever!) anywho, this is a great story and I hope you write more in the future:)
Date: August 17, 2007 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice! I liked how you wrote about Jim and Pam from Karen's pov.
"Sweetmeat" also made me laugh. Oh Creed!
Date: August 16, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Its good. I like the realization of Karen, how she realizes it. Um, yeah, that sentence was strange. Good job!
Date: August 15, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was good! I'm new to the whole fic thing too, I know how it feels. Hope you keep writing more stories!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading my story Absolutelylwill. This story has been sitting on my computer for darn near a year, but I was so intimidated by all the really good stories here at this site that I really didn't want to post it. Finally I just said the heck with it, if it's bad I'll just take it off.
Date: August 15, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hadn't expected Karen's point of view - what a great idea!! I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to see where you go with it. Awesome job!! Sweetmeat, LOL!
Author's Response:
Thank's for taking out the time to review pamcasso. Karen is an interesting character to write. And who doesn't love a little Creed--even his name is awesome!
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Date: August 15, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's interesting to see something from Karen's perspective. I'm curious to see where you're going to take this!
Author's Response: If you think about it, her following him was very impulsive. This is just my figuring what she would think in the day in and day out of it all.
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first Office fic! I hope we'll see lots more from you. I loved the realization Karen came to in the last line - very nicely put. And I totally loved Creed's "Can I do something for you, Sweetmeat?"
Author's Response: than you so much, kaystar. It is very exciting!! Truth be told, I didn't think I had it in me. It's funny how much I dislike Karen (answer: a lot) that she would be the subject of my first fic. And I can totally see Creed saying something as ridiculous as that.