Reviews For Fireworks
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Reviewer: Foxesjenna42 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2021 02:21 pm Title: Final Part

This was fantastic.

Reviewer: Foxesjenna42 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2021 02:15 pm Title: Part 2

Wow. Very nice.

Reviewer: Foxesjenna42 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2021 02:15 pm Title: Part 2

Wow. Very nice.

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 04:45 pm Title: Final Part

brilliantly done. i am incredulous that this is your FIRST.

Reviewer: dorkydancer Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 11:12 pm Title: Part 1

I have a bone to pick...there is definitely more to dating than having sex.  I'm a little appalled that you're implying that you're not "really dating" someone unless you're having sex with them.  Under that definition my husband and I didn't date until we got married!  Haven't finished the story yet but that disturbs me a little that dating and screwing now mean the same thing to some people.



Author's Response: umm... seriously? That is JIM and PAM in this fic. That is not how I feel about all relationships in life and it is never what I said about all relationships in life. I never said they weren't officially dating b/c they hadn't had sex yet but because they hadn't TALKED about it yet. I'm sorry you're so upset but I really don't understand why you're putting YOUR beliefs on me and my story, especially when its a total misunderstanding.

Reviewer: Laur815 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Part 1

hey! haha yah its me! I looooooved that fic!!! [[I miss it! :( ]] How are you!?

I have no idea if you can quote in fic replies, but this is my best effort.  I'm great, hope you are doing well also!  Glad to see you've jumped on the Jim/Pam train...I love that you are here!  I've been reading more than writing lately, but hopefully that will change.  I'm so happy to see you're still around. :) 

 



Author's Response: aww thanks! I've run into a few former LNers around the web lately at different places, but you're the first JAMer! I am happy to see you're a Jam fan also & I'm glad to see you're still around too, I looooved your fic, I saw you wrote one Jam one. I haven't read it yet b/c I haven't had time but I plan on it! I hope you'll write more!! :)

Reviewer: Laur815 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Final Part

Is this Sharipep from long ago....the one who used to write fanfiction for Jason and Courtney on JITLN?  If so, I'm gottaluvj&c from there....I wrote Through Her Eyes.  Regardless, this is a great fic....and your writing is brilliant.  Thanks for the story!

Author's Response: hey! haha yah its me! I looooooved that fic!!! [[I miss it! :( ]] How are you!?

Reviewer: rakerpation Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Part 2

hmmm...that was hot. 

 'nuff said.    

Reviewer: Ellelque Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 11:56 am Title: Part 2

I think I need a cold shower after that.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 06:37 am Title: Part 2

I can see them not rushing into things but if I was Pam I couldn't wait till July 4th.;)

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Part 2

Wow.  Just, wow that was so hot. 

What I really liked about it though - it was hot but also sweet - the way he kept nuzzling her neck and kissing her - I've already read this way too many times for it to be healthy!  



Author's Response: hahaha awww yay! thanks. Yeah, i've had this story in the can for a WHILE and a good chunk of the sex was alread written I just had to ... finish it off, if you will ;) (that's what she said!) and I definitely took my time with that. I wanted the first-time-Jam-Sex to be good and hot but realistic. I hope I did a good job. :)

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Part 2

Good God!  BEST SEX EVER!!!  I think my brain is scrambled and now I can't think.  And how much do I love that this is extra long and you took your time with this chapter. 

Author's Response: lol. thanks. I definitely took my time with it and sometimes I think I still didn't get it quite right but I'm proud of how it came out!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 10:51 pm Title: Part 2

WOW, That. Was. Hot.

Reviewer: pamcasso Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Part 1

I would LOVE to see an episode where they are at a barbecue! This is excellent, I'm very glad to see there will be more.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 06:14 pm Title: Part 1

Ooh, I saw this on your LJ and I was hoping you'd post this here! 

I think Pam & Jim and a second chance at fireworks is a great reason for writing.   Set against the backdrop of the wacky co-workers at a party -- bonus points.  A 'do-over' for the art show -- you win.

Looking forward to more of this (like the actual fireworks!) 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Part 1

Really enjoyed that.  Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Part 1

Ooooo!  Two more please!

This is wonderful.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Part 1

I really love this!  It's off to a great start.  Your imagery is perfect and you have them down pat!  I'm really looking forward to more :)

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