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Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 03:39 am Title: First

Well, like Barry White says, can't get enough of your love baby.

And what does it say that in some odd way, it kind of makes sense to me that he should appear to give Jim romantic guidance? You are too clever. Don't stop.



Author's Response:

well, first playboy stories, now barry white - I'll be moving into the SciFi/Fantasy realm next, if I'm not careful.....

Thanks, Ms. Colette! :-) 

Reviewer: Cassandra Mulder Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 12:38 am Title: First

LMAO! Dead!BarryWhite is stalking Jim? Awesome.

Bring this on. I mean it. ;) 



Author's Response: I shall do my best!  Thanks for reading and reviewing CM!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 09:00 pm Title: First

Aw, poor Jim, that is a vision that would scare me, too. But, he's right, you've got to listen to Barry White.
Too cute Mox. Really funny.

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, desert!  Sometimes I wish Barry would have shown up a bit earlier, you know??  :-)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 07:00 pm Title: First

Oh, the promise of great things to come, Moxie!  I'm loving it!  We got it togethah, baby...

Author's Response: haha - thanks, Nan!  I'll do my best to not let you (or Barry White!) down.  :-)

Reviewer: twentythree Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 06:58 pm Title: First

So I had these three thoughts in order when I finished this:

1) Holy crap, this is all kinds of awesome.

2) OMG, Ally McBeal! I was just looking up clips of that show today, how weird!

3) Wow, it's been three years since Barry White died??!

 

Anyway, you need to keep this up, I'm loving every second of it, and it's only been the first chapter! I cannot imagine what you're going to come up with!



Author's Response: thanks, twentythree!  I was shocked as well when I realised how long he's been gone.  And since I started this, I've had the overwhelming urge to listen to the first two Ally McBeal soundtrack cds...  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 06:57 pm Title: First

OMG....ROFLMAO. This is the best ever. Oh how I love you.

Author's Response: awww.....thanks!!  *huggy-hugs*  I'll do my best to meet expectations next chapter!!  Thanks for the review, LoveFool!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 06:13 pm Title: First

I never watched AllyMcBeal (loser) but when you mentioned Barry White, I was like, whoa, if Halpert is listening to that, he's probably thinking about Beesly rather than Filippelli.

Looking foward to more and welcome back to the states!



Author's Response: the irony being that I bet Karen would think playing Barry would be something inspiring.  And she'd be correct - just not for her chances. ;-) Thanks for reading....

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 06:10 pm Title: First

C'mon Mox!  You know I lurve you!  You are blowing my mind with this.  "Wow" is just so overused.  And inadequate.

(In other words, I am totally hooked and dying to know how this works out...) 



Author's Response: ah...you shouldn't tease a woman who's in need of about a week's worth of sleep.. ;-)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 05:38 pm Title: First

Dude.  Whatever you're on... will you share?

Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure how to take that.... thanks?

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 05:08 pm Title: First

Of course Jim was haunted by Barry White.  It's the only thing that makes sense.  I cannot wait to read the rest of this :)

Author's Response: I'm not sure anything in this story will make sense - except of course the part where Jim returns to Pam.  :-)

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 05:07 pm Title: First

LOL!!! Love the Alley McBeal reference.  Ahhh, I miss the days when that show was good, before it got bad, then got good again (with Downey Jr.), then got bad again (when Downey Jr. had to leave).  And of course The Biscuit was adorable especially with his love for Barry White.  Does this mean that Jim is going to turn into The Biscuit when he gets older?  Is he going to invent women's shoes with heals that he can control with a remote so they can be shot up to a height that is similar to his own?  

Anyway, this was a fun little blurb. 



Author's Response:

Sounds we liked the show at exactly the same times.. :-)

And I think Pam would appreciate heels like those, don't you??  Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 04:59 pm Title: First

WooHoo Time4Moxie, I was hoping this story would have Barry White connection when I read the title.  Looking forward to the next installments...steamy I hope.

Author's Response: well, the steam may have to be implied...but thanks for reading!

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