Date: August 27, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Chapter Two: Footsie
Conversation cards - I love it! I can imagine that Jim and Pam would have a little bit of awkwardness on their first date... there's just so much pressure there. And Lady and the Tramp... LOL. I could make a really mean Pam/Karen joke here, but I'll refrain. Just too easy. But keep going with your story! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! People seem to be making funny parallels to Lady and the Tramp, but I swear I didn't think of that when I wrote it. :) I'm hoping to put the last chapter up tonight or tomorrow morning. I'm waiting for the writing mood to strike me. . .
Date: August 27, 2007 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Two: Footsie
This is really great. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, you won't have to wait for long, I promise. Thanks for the review by the way!
Date: August 27, 2007 06:09 am Title: Chapter Two: Footsie
that was so cute.
Conversation cards? Only Kelly would have something like that.
Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't think that Kelly making conversation cards for Pam would be out of character for her at all. :)
Date: August 26, 2007 09:36 pm Title: Chapter Two: Footsie
ok, that last part about The Lady and the Tramp reminded me of Karen telling Jim that he had homeless hair. hehe...this is an interesting take on the first date. I really think that it will take those two a little while to get use to being openly affectionate with each other.
Author's Response: Gracias! I wasn't even thinking about the homeless hair, but you're right; I guess that would make Jim the tramp! I also thought that it's going to take some time for these two to be comfortable in an openly romantic relationship. There's been so much angst and unspoken feelings between them for so long, it'll probably be a pretty difficult transition. (I'll guess we'll find out in a month!)
Date: August 26, 2007 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Two: Footsie
Okay, you totally made me laugh with Kelly's conversation cards - awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm not very good with dialogue, so it's a pretty big relief that I wasn't the only one who thought that was funny! :)
Date: August 26, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Chapter Two: Footsie
HAHAHAHA LADY AND THE TRAMP.
That made me laugh out loud. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I'm working on the next chapter. Possible title: The Kiss. Ooohh. . . . :)