10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 03:48 pm Title: "Margot Tenenbaum? Well, since when?"
Well, Jack, since FF.net is currently unresponsive (wonder if it has anything to do with this story being over there? Hmmm...), you're getting my review over here instead.
Never have I been more frightened of Creed, yet never have I been more intrigued by him. While initially repulsed by the idea that Creed's girlfriend is studying Algebra, I have to say that he must be doing something right, y'know? Or else it's more a commentary on this girl's low self-esteem. Either way, I thank you for piquing my curiosity and scaring the bejeezus out of me in one fell swoop.
And what can be said about Karen's TH about comfortable shoes? Pure genius, that. As is the new C-Virus, that threatens to destroy all life on this planet. Here's hoping that once Dwight can find a suitable innoculation (provided by Jim, perhaps?), that he will stand as mankind's last hope for survival and fight this virus the only way he knows how...like a Schrute.
Brilliance continues to abound, Jack, and I'm glad I've got a ringside seat for the apocalypse.
Author's Response: Yeah, ffnet has a lot of problems... that's one of the reasons I started posting here (that and I felt that the looser format and stronger rating system of this site would allow me to write stories that were more adult-oriented than what I've done so... and if that doesn't make you want to run and hide, I don't know what will.) rnrnFunny thing is, this story was my attempt cut back on the some of sexual depravity that has become the hallmark of the 138 style, and yet we've got foot fetishes, we've got Creed involved with much younger women... I guess I just can't give it up cold turkey. As for the C-Virus... I can't say how happy I am to finally get an idea for Lonny. rnrnThanks as always, Mose, glad to have you aboard.
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2007 02:01 am Title: "I do like Dignan... but he's a liar."
hahaha, this has amazing potential! stem cells=comedy gold
Author's Response: Hey, thanks... you know, I did have my doubts about the stem cell joke, but I guess it landed.