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Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Manure

I think this was the first poop story I've ever read! I was in Lancaster PA a few weeks ago and I can sure attest to the smell of the manure... but to touch it, ewwww.

Author's Response: Yeah - I don't know what has been going on with me lately, but poop is taking a central theme.  And come on, it's Dwight.  You think he doesn't touch the manure?  thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Cross

I enjoyed your Meredith. I hope we see more of happy sober Meredith in S4

Author's Response: :)  I am so glad!  I would love to see a happy Meredith at the close of the series, but she is so damn funny as an angry drunk....

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Silver

Creed?  Paying for spooning?  Okay... ;)  I actually think Creed's pretty decent looking, particularly for a guy his age, and he doesn't dress like a homeless guy, really.  It's the crazy things that he says sometimes that make us go "ugh!"

Will we get to see some more?  This is fun.  



Author's Response:

Really?  I don't know - I keep thinking back to the shirt he gave Jim for Christmas.... and thinking that he wears the same suit daily.... but that's just me!

Yeah, I have many more scenarios planned.  This is a big departure from my normal style (angst, angst and more angst) and I am enjoying it, glad to see you are as well!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Manure

I like this, and I get the Mose-attraction, but I had to read it about 4 times before I was (fairly) certain that the daughter of the manure seller is speaking, Farmer Schrute is Dwight and he's inspecting the manure, and Mose is the object of her affection standing behind Dwight.   Actually 4 times, so maybe it's a little too subtle, or maybe I'm slow.  (Or maybe both...)

How can we arrange it so you can write "Mose and the Manure-Seller's Daughter"?  Arranged marriage?  Buggy breakdown?  Kidnapping? (/Jim) 



Author's Response: Hmmm - I'm glad that you brought this up.  I was trying hard to make sure it was understood that it was Mose, I didn't think of the other voices being that discombobulated....  Maybe I need to add a little something in there.  Oh - and "Buggy breakdown"? Totally cracked me up... Thanks for taking the time to read and review. 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 02:47 pm Title: Cross

I love this, especially the Stanley and Meredith sections. To think that there's a couple people out there harboring Stanley and Meredith crushes is awesome.  I wish Meredith's admirer would ask her out.  She deserves someone who'll be attracted to the front of her. ;)

Author's Response:

Oh thanks!  You never know... one day he may work up the nerve.  I'm trying to decide between the more anonymous formats (which were more Stanley and Meredith) or the more direct and involved (Ryan).  I'm leaning towards more anonymous. 

ANYWAYS - thanks for your reviews - you give the prettiest reviews of all the reviews!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 10:49 am Title: Silver

This is a lovely chapter.  It's unusual to see Creed treated with this much dignity.  "...eager for another hour of quiet humanity."  So nice.



Author's Response: Thanks so much.... I like to think there's a lot to Creed we don't see.  Thanks again for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 05:27 am Title: Manure

Ghost Baby was previously the shittiest (poo filled) story I've read.  Congratulations, you've just taken over that title.  Ewwww, remnants clinging to his arm hair, ewwwww.  Great job, and I loved chapter 1 also.  Strangers always seem so much more mysterious than they really are.

Author's Response: Teehee - I'm glad you... enjoyed?  I love the idea of Dwight as a farmer... thanks for reading and reviewing...

Reviewer: mamzalini Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Cross

what a clever idea. it's  bitter sweet to think of those pining after our wonderful dunder mifflin employees. please update sooooon.



Author's Response: Oh - thank you so much.  I'm glad that you enjoyed...

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Cross

Oh, this was really good.  Please do continue.


Author's Response: Oh - thank you so much!!!  Good to see you again!

Reviewer: VelvetMorning Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 03:18 pm Title: Cross


This is a great idea.  Please continue!



Author's Response: Oh - thank you very much.  I have a few more scenarios in mind, so thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know what you think. 

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