Date: March 03, 2008 01:16 pm Title: Understanding
This is amazing. It's like...all other things UNequal, the relationships will ultimately be the same. Because deep down, everyone in the office likes everyone else. I assume we're still gonna have some JAM love, and I feel kind of bad for Angela. That is, unless Angela ends up with Dwight, in which case that's awesome.
8 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2008 07:12 pm Title: Understanding
Yay - you updated! Such cute twists and turns - especially Roy and Darryl being gay and Mose being a womanizer. Can't wait to see what happens on Jim and Pam's adventure!
Date: March 02, 2008 06:50 pm Title: Understanding
This is fun!! I wonder what Jan is like?? Or Madge from the warehouse? Oh, the fun you could have with this! Looking forward to more.
Date: March 02, 2008 01:18 pm Title: Understanding
I love how you switch things around and Jim and Pam are still connected
and I like the idea of Mose being a womanizer
8 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2007 09:39 pm Title: Awkwardness
Jim and Angela, hmmmm. Interesting couple! And I vote for adding Oscar to the mix.
Date: September 01, 2007 06:23 am Title: Awkwardness
This is fun! And the question at the end is really an effective way of getting review-sneaky! :)
I say Kevin, because his 180 has a lot of potential. (Would he be Angela, basically?)
Date: September 01, 2007 05:57 am Title: Awkwardness
This is REALLY good... I really like how you are nailing the characters (TWSS)
good job
Date: September 01, 2007 12:20 am Title: Impressions
I know everyone has said this.
But I love the concept of this story its so unique and funny!
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 11:08 pm Title: Awkwardness
I love it. And I totally vote for Kevin. xD
7 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Impressions
I'm really enjoying this! I can't believe that Pam isn't the least bit interested in Jim's Jim-ness. Can't wait to see what comes next!
9 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Impressions
This . . . .is . .. .HILARIOUS!!! I am so loving it. What a fun and innovative concept. And you had me right at the beginning talking about Jim and Dwight going to Marvin Johnson’s Gourd Collection. Seriously, who comes up with that kind of shit! I mean, it is so something Dwight would do, but I just love how nochalantly Jim is going along with it. Brilliant! I want more.
Date: August 31, 2007 07:57 am Title: Impressions
I love this! Please give us more. I MUST know who Meredith is in this universe.
Date: August 31, 2007 07:12 am Title: Impressions
I really like the concept of this story. It's totally weird to see Pam as a "bitch." Still, it'll be interesting to see how this continues to play out. (I can actually kind of see Dwight & Jim as friends, sort of, so ... yeah.)
Comment about the formatting: I personally find the bolded dialogue to be distracting. I don't think it's necessary and if you feel like the conversation is getting too confusing (as to who said what), use tags, like, "Right, like that's really going to work," Dwight said, sneering at him. Etc. Also: I'm ready whenever you're ready to send over the Dundies Re-Dux. Heh.
Author's Response:
Heh... thanks for your input on the formatting. I originally didn't have the bold so I went back and forth on the whole thing. But I changed it so no bolded dialogue. :)
Yeah, Dundies will hopefully be finished before the start of the season. lol.
Date: August 31, 2007 07:02 am Title: Impressions
This is going to be good!
Date: August 31, 2007 05:21 am Title: Impressions
Huh. Interesting concept. Will he eventually win her over? And is that Angela being nice? I think it will take me a chapter or two to get used to Bitchy!Pam. Is bitchy really the right word? Anyway, I'm very much looking forward to future chapters.