1 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2019 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Your writing is so beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
Date: September 02, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so completely lovely. I love seeing Pam seemingly so in tune with herself.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: September 02, 2007 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I like how Pam wants the bright colors, but the charcoal allows her to draw a parking lot... :)
I can so imaine all those thoughts in Pam's head, andher just needing to draw after that. Great job! Because she is rising from what she once was.
Enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
It seems like after all the watery colors she used in her first art show, she'd want to go with bright colors. Thanks, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: September 01, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is all sorts of good! You did a great job of Pam's point of view and the detail was great!
Author's Response: Thank you!
7 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. You've got a very elegant writing style that comes across in the text, and I was wowed by the device of using quotes from Pam's past to explain who she is today. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the quotes part. I actually had some trouble remembering the exact quotes from memory, so it's good to hear that it worked out.