8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2009 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1
i love this, but i noticed that the beginning is in past tense, and starting after "Jim pulled back a bit, "Ow Beesly, not so rough," and playfully slapped her leg, smiling adoringly at her. it moves to present tense.
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! Pure smut! I sometimes feel like such a hussy because I always am looking for and devouring good smut, and this my friend, was some wonderful smut! Fantastic job!
Author's Response: Yea! Thanks tessa mae, I'm so glad lisahoo rec'd it and that you enjoyed it!
Date: September 02, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW, I think my head spinning. Great...no, fantastic job. That was written so well. Not to over the top, but just enough to make it hot and tasteful. Standing ovation!
Author's Response:
::bows::
Thank you that is so kind of you. That was my intention to make it hot enough but not harsh and overly nasty, tasteful smut. :)
Date: September 02, 2007 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Some great smut you got there! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: September 02, 2007 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1
aww i love you too. ... wait what?
no its wonderful hon..
Author's Response: lol, you're such a dork, honestly that's all I can say. Glad you liked it, sorry you had to wait forever to read it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2007 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was supposed to be lolcats smut!
Seriously, this is extremely hot and should keep me antsy at work for the day.
Author's Response:
The lolcats smut is later silly!
Thanks Larry so glad you liked it, don't re-read it at work though, could drag down productivity. :)
Date: September 02, 2007 03:41 am Title: Chapter 1
wow.
my husband has been reaping the rewards from all the smut flying around here lately.
I like your attention to detail. Really good.
Author's Response: Hehe, love it when the men get to enjoy as well. I'm so glad you liked it.