10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 10:49 am Title: Morning
Larry-- All of these are great, but his Michael one? It's perfect. It's heartbreakingly sweet and wonderful. Wow.
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 10:15 am Title: Pictures
Beautifully told. I wouldn't have had it any other way. Fantastic work!
Date: November 15, 2007 10:12 am Title: Pictures
Oh, Michael. I hope he gets those children someday. And he's all about his friends, in his scary, obnoxious Michael-way....
Date: November 14, 2007 03:15 pm Title: Memories
Ahhhhh!!!! I thought you were going to have them live long enough so that they could take special medicine that would make them live forever!
Oh, well, what you wrote was heartbreakingly beautiful. They're together in heaven now pranking God.
Date: November 14, 2007 11:40 am Title: Memories
Aww... she remembered enough. Now I'm tearing up and I'm out of the good kind of kleenex (the kind with the lotion).
I blame you Larry. And don't think I don't know who is still left.
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 10:45 am Title: Memories
Yay! They're finally dead!
*please note my sarcasm* Heh...
Lar, you know that I enjoy this and I look forward to the ending... it's the Rapture, right? For Michael? ;)
Date: November 14, 2007 10:36 am Title: Separation
I loved these - so sweet and so sad. My only problem is a medical one: if Jim had a degenerative disease, it's unlikey he'd live into his 90s, or, if he developed it so late in life, it's unlikely that he'd linger as long as it seems he did. I would just expect to see him die younger, or else have some other ailment like cancer that might strike so late and last so long. Sorry to be a downer, though I suppose the topic calls for it.
Author's Response: Good point, but in my own defense, I suppose medicine could have changed quite a bit by 2072,
Date: November 14, 2007 10:28 am Title: Memories
I have really enjoyed this, but reading Jim and Pam's death literally made me cry....it was heartbreaking....GOOD JOB!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 10:17 am Title: Memories
There goes my eyeliner....ugh!
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 10:16 am Title: Memories
sooooooooooooooooooooooo sad... ok that was as drawn out as i felt my heart drop through to my stomach. but i do like that she barely remembers, clutching the yogurt lid after she passes on. nice touch :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 09:52 am Title: Memories
I thought this was extremely fitting of the two of them. Really good job.
Date: November 14, 2007 09:27 am Title: Memories
Aw Larry you're on a role this week. A yogurt lid, really? So sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 09:26 am Title: Memories
A perfect ending for Pam. I just know that true love holds on, no matter what, and she was able to have that one last tie to Jim. I'm so glad they went close together, so neither was alone for very long in either life.
Now, please excuse me while I go get a tissue. :)
Date: November 14, 2007 09:25 am Title: Memories
not Pam Halpert? I'm too sad to say anything else. except that it appeals to my heart and I love it. the yogurt lid!!! :'(
Author's Response: Of course Pam Halpert! That was my mistake and it has now been fixed. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 14, 2007 09:25 am Title: Memories
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
8 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 02:31 pm Title: Separation
Oh no! Jim is dead and Pam has dementia/Alzheimers. That is a double whammy of angst. I like that you gave Jim a nice long life. And Pam won't be sad or lonely since she doesn't remember. But I am now very sad and depressed. So thanks. (just kidding.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. Sorry I depressed you. :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 11:59 am Title: Separation
What a sad ending for Jim. At least he lived a long life, and had Pam at his side when he passed (even if she didn't know who he was). This chapter is very haunting.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!
Date: November 13, 2007 11:38 am Title: Separation
A well written series larrymcg. This one in particular brought back all the feelings I had watching the closing scenes of SFU. Brilliant series - really like the way you've used the idea for our friends in the Office.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! I really appreciate it.
Date: November 13, 2007 10:17 am Title: Separation
Well, that's just sad. :(
Author's Response: Yeah it is, but at least he lived a long life!
Date: November 13, 2007 10:14 am Title: Separation
Ok, so he lived to be 93? And together with his true love for what, at least 60 years? That's a pretty good life. I have a great aunt and uncle in their 90's and they're both still together. Very lucky. But you still made me cry, Larry.
Author's Response:
Sorry I made you cry :(
I'm really glad you liked it, though! Thanks for the review.
Date: November 13, 2007 09:48 am Title: Separation
Gah! Larry, you're killing me with these. At this rate, I'll be the next one to go. So sad, and yet so good. You astound me.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 07:57 am Title: Separation
Oh jeez, I just started bawling at my desk. I'm such a weenie....*sniff*
Date: November 13, 2007 07:52 am Title: Separation
Ok, I'm glad you made Jim almost a hundred. I'm still sad though. Poor Pammy.
Author's Response:
Sorry I made you sad. :(
Thanks for the comment!
Date: November 13, 2007 07:48 am Title: Separation
I am so sad right now. That is the worst way to die, when the people you love don't even know who you are.
Author's Response: At least there was alot of happiness before the sad, though. Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 07:38 am Title: Morning
Really touching. Nice to see that Jim lives to a ripe old age.