Date: September 22, 2007 05:34 am Title: Ryan
Ha! Ryan -- you do need some shots! And Kandy will be SWEET!
Author's Response: It definitely will be. Yeah, Ryan did not know what he was getting himself into. I wrote a Ryan one that was not funny at all, but more sad and remorseful of what he did to Kelly. But....I don't think he really is...so I scrapped it. Thanks for the review lisahoo.
Date: September 21, 2007 07:00 am Title: Kelly
This was great, loved it! Kelly's a smart woman. I loved Pam's resistance to drink, and then Kelly, being her usual blunt self, just blurts out her thoughts. So funny. Loved it!
Author's Response: Yeah, Kelly doesn't have an inner-monologue....at least I don't think so....so anything goes, especially when it comes to advice. Thanks for the review firthgal.
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2007 10:44 am Title: Dwight II and Andy II
HAHA! I love it. I love Guitar Hero (even though I have only heard about it), and I love that Dwight and Andy are drunk and playing together, and haha. Yeah, so laughing.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that you liked it. Yeah, I just thought the image of them drunkenly and angrily playing Guitar Hero II against each other was funny and went from there. Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 19, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Dwight II and Andy II
OMG!!! Squeeeeeee!!!!! Oh man, I loved this one! Dwandy and Kandy all in the same chapter. I so love it when Andy and Dwight fight with each other, and you totally nailed their dynamic. So perfect. I also love that Angela and Kelly were competitive with each other over whose boyfriend would win, hee. And Andy singing? You know I can't resist that. I LOVE the wink that he gives Kelly. And Dwight falling over beer cans when he was trying to push Andy! Hahahahahahaha. So perfect. You have outdone yourself with this chapter! Loved it!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that you liked it. I love the dynamic between Andy/Dwight, and of course I had to include Kandy, how could I not? Plus, Guitar Hero II seemed like a good excuse to get Andy to sing, so I had to. I'm glad that you liked it firthgal, and thanks for the review.
8 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Dwight II and Andy II
"He landed with a metallic crash." Cute line. And I liked Kelly squealing appreciatively.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words and review kaystar.
Date: September 19, 2007 05:41 pm Title: Roy
I love that Roy misinterpretred Jim's "off and on" and used it to talk about his love life. Awkward...
Author's Response: Yeah, definitely awkward. Still, hopefully you found it funny, and thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 19, 2007 05:37 pm Title: Darryl
I looove Darryl - and you did him proud! Such cute phrases!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the phrases. I was trying to do them justice, and they seem lame enough that Michael would buy them. Thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 19, 2007 05:34 pm Title: Michael II
I am soo glad BaraJam asked what Wiki T-square meant! I had no clue. I love stories that are not only funny but educational, too.
Author's Response: Ha, well I'm glad that if nothing else, I taught people a sex position today. Good times. Thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 19, 2007 05:26 pm Title: Kevin
Jim covered in chocolate....yumm. That's definitely a win-win-wow!
Author's Response: Haha, I wish I had more than 55 words to describe it, but I hope the image came through okay. Thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 19, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Dwight II and Andy II
Permission to 'cheat' granted. Actually, there are four people involved, so feel free to keep riffing on this scene.
And even with their tenuous alliance in "The Job", I could see them being very competitive.
Bonus points for Kandy!
Author's Response: Thank you for the permission. I couldn't do it in 55 words, so I figured I'd expand it. No harm, right? And yes, while I"m no firthgal, I do love my Kandy, so I had to include it. Thanks for the review lisahoo.
Date: September 19, 2007 05:18 pm Title: Jan
You nailed Jan. (TWSS) Seriously, I can truly see Jan thinking along those lines. Hopefully S4 Jan will be less train-wreckish.
Author's Response: Yeah, I hope so too. I'm not sure how she could be more train-wreckish, but who knows? Maybe she'll show up in the office in stretch pants with dyed hair and half-drunk or something....Thanks for the review kaystar.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Dwight II and Andy II
So funny! My son is really, REALLY into Guitar Hero II. I can just envision it. If he were home now, I'd be hearing it : )
Author's Response: Well I hope for your sake it isn't like the Andy/Dwight Guitar Hero II faceoffs. Thanks for the review NanReg.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Roy
Fabulous!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind word and review Shassafrass.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Dwight II and Andy II
Heh, I can totally picture Andy singing the last line of this song. This story totally makes me giggle, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah that seems like a song ripe for Andy Bernard. I'm glad that you liked the story, and thanks for the review schrutebucks.
Date: September 19, 2007 09:55 am Title: Roy
That was PERFECT!
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much, that's very kind of you. I'm glad that you liked Drunk!Confessional!Roy. Poor Jim, he never saw it coming. Thanks for the review Abigail.
Date: September 19, 2007 09:31 am Title: Roy
i am just loving this series - and this last one was amazing! very nice - tawdry but in a classy way :)
Author's Response: Can I borrow that phrase? I love that, "tawdy but in a classy way." Next time someone asks me to describe myself, I'm breaking that one out. Thanks for the review Emilys List, and congrats on being ribboned for your new story!
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2007 05:47 am Title: Roy
haha! well, i admit at first i thought this was current and i was like awakward - jim and roy - and then i realized (purse girl) that it was season 1-2... and haha! wow... yep, pam was totally thinkin fo jim, i know it! you could see that she was looking at jim....
Author's Response: She definitely was, you see it again even more clearly in "The Fire," where she pulls Roy into a kiss when she sees Katy. Which has always stuck out to me, throughout the series, because it's so unlike her. And, so I think she's obviously guilty or displacing her feelings. Which I think is true....but also kind of (for me) dims my respect for her. That said, she's still my favorite character in the show...Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 18, 2007 11:17 pm Title: Roy
That was priceless. But I like to think Pam was an animal with Roy after that basketball game...just happened to be imagining someone else. [whistles innocently]
Author's Response: I completely agree, of course. Watching Jim run around obviously..."pre-heated the oven" so to speak. (that came out kinda sleazy.) Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it, and thank you for the review invis.
Date: September 18, 2007 10:35 am Title: Michael II
Haha, yes! Love it! Especially the fact that Michael is terrified of Jan. Hee.
Author's Response: Well in Michael's defense, he should be terrified of Jan. Everyone should be. Ha, thanks for the review firthgal.
Date: September 18, 2007 07:45 am Title: Darryl
Yay for drunk Darryl! I love his interactions with Michael and can just picture this happening on the show
Author's Response: I love his interactions with Michael too, and I'm glad that you could picture it happening. That was what I was going for. Thanks for the review jrich82.
Date: September 18, 2007 06:27 am Title: Darryl
Ah, I love Darryl's black phrases. Dinkin Flicka.
Author's Response: Dickin' Flicka, indeed. Yeah, I hope that I did Darryl's black-man phrases justice here. I love them to. Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 18, 2007 06:25 am Title: Michael II
omg, i don't know what i love more. when michael realizes he is talking to both pam AND jim or when michael thinks an slipped him viagra, or wiki tsquare, or, the end. omg, this was hilarious!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. I pulled out all kinds of tricks to get this much action into 55 words. Probably the most happening for any one chapter that I've written. Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 17, 2007 11:44 pm Title: Jim II
Awwwwwwwwww this is just all kinds of adorable Jim. Awwwww
Author's Response: Haha, thank you. I was going for the long "awwwws" so I'm glad that you got that. Thanks for the review BaraJam.
Date: September 17, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Michael II
I am afraid to ask...but what is Wiki TSquare?? o.0
Author's Response: Ha, well "Wiki" means to Wikipedia something. And, "T-Square" (as actually found on Wikipedia) is a sexual position. Michael probably could have just asked..but I'm pretty sure he's too scared to. Thanks for the review BaraJam.
Date: September 17, 2007 11:38 am Title: Kevin
Andy!!! Oh, I love Andy. His comment about Tuna falling into the chocloate river was brilliant, loved it!
Author's Response: As soon as I realized it was going to involve chocolate, I knew that I had to include Andy, and let him have the last line. He's all about not falling in the chocolate river. Thanks for the review firthgal.