Date: September 15, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Jan
ah yes, i agree - train wreck jan
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm interested to see just how she de-rails herself in Season 4. And whether or not she brings Michael along with her (probably). Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Kevin
Hahaha. These are really well done and much more thought out and insightful than the average 55 word fic. I am officially loving these!
Author's Response: That's very kind of you to say. I really like the 55 word format, its challenging, but also you're freer to use different ideas. Thanks for the review desert island.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Jan
Oh, wow. Perfect Jan. So ssad and wanting to be loved, but not knowing how to love in return. Well done.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked my take on Jan. I know she's supposed to be funny/crazy, but I just see her as sad/crazy. So, that said, is there is a "Jan II" I might go for more funny(I'm an enigma). We'll see. Thanks for the review desert island.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Karen
Oh, God, that is hilarious! Great use of songs in this one. Definitely and interesting spin!
Author's Response: Thanks, I had several ideas for Karen, but I decided to go with this one. I'm thinking if/when I do "Karen II" I'll try something funnier, or more off-beat. Thanks for the review desert island.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Toby I
Poor poor Toby. I hope S4 is kind to him. Or at least not as mean.
Author's Response: I know, Toby needs a break. I'd love to see a Jim/Toby prank in Season 4. They gotta throw him a bone. Thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Stanley
Wow. Score one for Kelly! Way to get back at Ryan.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's the meanest and most effective way probably. Everyone thinks that Kelly isn't smart, but when it comes to revenge, I'm thinking she's got game. Thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Creed
"He looked up. It was Scharutey." I love Creed, and you did him perfectly!
Author's Response:
and TWSS.
Thanks for the set-up and the review kaystar.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Dwight
“Please Commander Adama, New Caprica is in trouble.” She cooed gently." Too funny, I can imagine Angela cooing while Dwight tries to "git 'er done". Very funny!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. Yeah, Angela's "softer side" doesn't last very long....and usually ends in slapping. Thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 15, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Jim II
“Be the big spoon?”
I LOVE "How I met Your Mother"! Marshall and Lilly Kick ass!! This was such a cute chapter!! Can't wait to see how you'll write Pam drunk!! This story is awesome!! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Hey you noticed! I was going to put it out there in the chapter end notes, but I was curious to see how many people would even notice it. Yeah, I love HIMYM too. Thanks for your review bee sly.
Date: September 15, 2007 09:00 am Title: Jim II
haha, all that we have in my house is eitherboxed wine, or really really old stuff that hasn't be touched since i was born.
Author's Response: Haha, that is pretty much exactly what I have to. That's weird...I wonder why that is. Maybe I should drink more. Hmmm....well, while I contemplate that, thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 15, 2007 08:59 am Title: Karen
yep. awkward turtle.
Author's Response: Haha, absolutely. Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2007 08:58 am Title: Toby II
i like that theory. hehe. norwegian. i love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like my theory. I figure the combination of pranking, and the fact that Michael has no control got him banishment to the annex (a la Ryan). Could also be why Toby doesn't take any of complaints against Jim seriously. Who knows? Anyway, thank you for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 15, 2007 08:57 am Title: Toby I
poor toby.... he has such a rough life
Author's Response: He really does. I feel bad for him, so I had to immediately give him a happy 55worder. Its not his fault that he's not Jim, who else can be? Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2007 06:55 am Title: Karen
I think this might be my fav chapter so far. Totally plausible, no? So subtle Karen. I also totally agree with your pre-Pam Jim and Toby pranking team. Good call.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the Karen chapter. It's obvious pretty different then any of the other chapters, and I'll try to do a happy/funny Karen one in the future. Also, yeah I think the Toby/Jim prank-team had to have happened. It makes my understanding of Michael's Toby-hate more realistic. Thanks for the review feared_or_loved.
Date: September 15, 2007 06:53 am Title: Jim II
I almost forgot about this chapter! Be the big spoon! How freaking cute!
Author's Response: Ha, I'm glad that you liked it. I actually wrote a completely different one for JimII, that had him being emotional when drunk, but I scaled it back to this. Thanks for the review lisahoo.
Date: September 15, 2007 05:56 am Title: Karen
Karen, Karen, Karen. Definitely better than crying next to a fountain.
Author's Response: I agree. Despite the dubious fact about her moving Scranton, I always felt like Karen was stronger then the show made her really. So staring down an ex's girlfriend qualifies. Thanks for the review lisahoo.
Date: September 15, 2007 05:53 am Title: Jim
Being Jim's big spoon? That pretty much tops my fantasy list. And I can't believe I'm actually going to leave that as a review, but there it is. I'm loving these, keep them coming!
Author's Response: I somehow missed this review until now, but thank you very much for the kind words and the review VelvetMorning.
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 10:45 pm Title: Jim II
These all are really, really great.
Author's Response: That's very nice of you to say, thank you. These are really fun to write as well. I'm having a good time imagining all the different ideas for drunk situations with the different employees. Thanks for the review Shassafrass.
Date: September 14, 2007 09:38 pm Title: Jim II
Awwww, JAM spooning. Doesn't get much better than that!
Author's Response: I thought that it was pretty sweet, and Jam is very sweet in general. So sugar-overload. I'm glad that you liked it, and thanks for the review Abigail.
Date: September 14, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Toby II
I am so glad you did a happy Toby! I love his prank with Jim!
Author's Response: I know its kinda self-indulgent, but I would love to see a Toby/Jim prank on Michael or Dwight at some point. But, after the escort service, I figured happy!Toby needed to be seen. Thanks for the review desert island.
Date: September 14, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Toby I
Hahahaha. Poor Toby!
Author's Response: I know, I sympathize with the guy. But, lets be honest, he didn't meet that girl at the gym. No way. Thanks for the review desert island.
Date: September 14, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Dwight
Dwight and Angela are so creepy and gross and awesome. So awesome.
Author's Response: I know, this is definitely the creepiest one that I've done so far. Dwight/Angela role-playing is kinda....well weird, but I can totally see it happening. Thanks for the review desert island.
Date: September 14, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Andy
That's brilliant! The Kandy version! Seriously perfect: IPA and Jager.
Author's Response: I love Kandy, so I had to make Andy's, or at least one of his, a Kandy-version. Thank you for the review desert island.
Date: September 14, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Angela
Wow. This made me laugh oh so much: 'She was getting cookie from Dwight tonight, whether he wanted to or not.
She was hungry.'
Hilarious!!
Author's Response: Ha, I'm glad that you liked that part. It bordered on super-creepy, but if "The Negotiation" is any indication AngelaLust is pretty strong. (Probably because it's so repressed). Thanks for the review desert island.
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2007 07:50 am Title: Creed
Yup. This did, in fact, make me Laugh Out Loud.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. But seriously I couldn't get a ROTFLOL? Alright, I'll work up to it. Ha, thanks for the review Shassafrass.