1 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2018 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ohmygosh, I so totally LOVE this! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time because I never knew what was going to happen next --- I LOVE being surprised at every turn! And oh, so very sweet! This has not been reviewed in over 8 years, but I hope you read this because it made me COMPLETELY happy! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2010 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Kieyra, I adore this story, and I don't know how I never read it before! It's perfect, so perfect. Not even sure if you'll see this, but I had to let you know just in case.
Date: November 21, 2006 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
I adore this! Oh my god, so sweet. If only this were the case *sigh*
Great work! :D
8 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very, very lovely.
And this: and even if the last three years have been like the most painful high-school crush ever, the truth is you're both staring down thirty and you both know the basic steps of this dance.
is just an incredible line.
7 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 10:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay for sneakyPam! And I love the imagery of this line:
You turn over in bed, and finally chase that single, warm memory down into sleep.
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
"The look says: Right now? You have to admit I'm fabulous."
Pam DOES have that look! Haha, this was awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2006 03:28 am Title: Chapter 2
I must say, I never saw THAT coming. It was such a great chapter. Well written, and you are very good at building up the tension as it went on. Awesome!
8 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was just so utterly sweet. Great ending :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad you added the second chapter. I love second-person fics (when well-done, which this one was), and this was just so sweet, and so in-character for both of them...
10 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Loved loved loved this-you have their voices so well and I love that it was all awkwardness and uncertainty for a while. You captured what could really be Jim-Pam dialogue so well. Also love that you have her showing up at the airport in the end, it made me grin :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 08:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooh, I've read the first chapter before, but I'm loving the second chapter even more! I love that Pam showed up at the airport to surprise him at the end. Sweet.
Lovely story!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2006 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
So adorable! I love the idea of Pam taking a huge step like that, to match his.
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a wonderful ending to a beautiful story. It made my heart smile.
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2006 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
If I had my druthers, this would be exactly how it happened. Exactly--down to the very last word.
Sweet and real and happy without forgeting all the many, many complications. This was just lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2006 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great ending. I didn't think she was gonna show up on the plane. Great job.
7 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the POV. And, of course, I love that JAM has a chance :)
6 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 08:44 am Title: Chapter 1
very very good! i loved it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
This really described Jim's longing so well - "You'd imagined it a thousand times. More than that. Five hundred sheets of paper to a ream, ten reams per case. Fill a truck with cases of paper and maybe you can approach the number of minutes you've spent imagining what this moment might be like." Such a beautiful story.
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Second person -- I, uh, WOW WOW WOW. Great stuff. Amazingly written.
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW -- Just beautifully written! And it seems so realistic as well -- poignant but not over the top; dramatic but not ridiculously so. I could totally see this as what really happened. Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Wouldn't it be nice if this was canon? I don't think they're going to make it that easy, but this was lovely to imagine.
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this. Thank you for writing it :)
Date: August 21, 2006 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
This had the same hushed quality as the actual Kiss. Beautiful.
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
This was fantastic. Great style. Second person Jim is really hard to pull off but you did it brilliantly.
Yay for second kisses. I so hope this is the way it went after our screens went black last May.
Fingers crossed!