10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 12:57 am Title: I don't understand the question...
I really like this story! I hope you continue it! I am looking forward to reading more! :)
Date: September 19, 2007 10:57 am Title: I don't understand the question...
I really, really like this. It's exceptional work so far. I actually went back and reread the opening snippet of conversation after you seamlessly lead the first week's session to that point. And the second week! Wow. You have done an amazing job with not only Michael's voice but with his inner workings. What a brilliant idea to psycho-analyze him. I really do hope you continue with the therapy sessions!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review!! I know my response is really late, I remember reading this when you first left it so I don't know why I didn't respond then. Anyway, I'm still trying to work through another chapter of this, hopefully it'll be finished and up soon. I'm glad you like the idea and the execution so far!!!! Please keep reading it and letting me know what you think.
Date: September 18, 2007 07:13 pm Title: I don't understand the question...
I like this so far. I'm interested to see where you go with it.
Author's Response: thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2007 06:48 am Title: I don't understand the question...
This is great. Very in character. Oh Michael, where to begin. You could probably write a book about him. More please!
Author's Response: lol you really could! More soon
Date: September 16, 2007 05:40 am Title: I don't understand the question...
What a great story idea and your Michael is perfect. Clearly, he's not burdened by self-awareness, so it's really interesting to read his responses to the "three qualities" question. So many ways this can go and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: lol thank you, yeah Michael sort of needs things to be pointed out to him... ;-)