Date: November 10, 2007 05:10 pm Title: 8:00 AM
Still loving it!
Nice job, Jim, calling Pam on the couple stuff :) Can they please pretend to be a couple at all of the other apartments? Pretty please? Like, they could act like they're doing it because it's funny, but the readers know the truth.
Wow. I am very invested in this fic!
Date: November 10, 2007 04:55 pm Title: 8:00 AM
Oh come on... They need at least SOME time together.
Date: November 10, 2007 04:50 pm Title: 8:00 AM
Eeee! Cute :) I knew Pam heard him!
Date: November 10, 2007 04:06 pm Title: 8:00 AM
On the long side? Not long enough say I (/IrishJim). Beautifully written (as ever) and I particularly enjoyed Busted!Jim when Pam called him on his bending of the truth to the policeman.
Date: November 10, 2007 03:54 pm Title: 8:00 AM
uh, oh.... they're getting dangerously close to the truth here. Can't wait to see what 9am brings.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 03:50 pm Title: 8:00 AM
Time does fly. You don't know how excited I was to see this updated. The day is half over and that's kind of exciting because I really want to know where this ends up 24 hours from the start. Awesome as usual!
Date: November 08, 2007 04:12 pm Title: 7:00 AM
I love this story. The way they expressed their "who would you do" continuation was dead on. Please continue.
Date: November 08, 2007 11:41 am Title: 7:00 AM
I love Jim and Pam discussing Who'd You Do! But Pam did pick Oscar, right?
Date: November 07, 2007 09:46 pm Title: 7:00 AM
Oh thank God you updated! With this writers strike I am seriously going to be reading a lot of good fics and I was starting to worry something crazy like you'd gone to join them!!
Yesss I love Jim telling Pam he'd do her. Awesome. Just another thing that needed to be said lol.
“You totally cheated at that, by the way. Using Kevin as a cop-out for your real answer.”
Nope, it’s awkward now.
haha! I love that! You have no idea how much I love this fic. Please update soon!
Date: November 07, 2007 07:21 pm Title: 7:00 AM
I looooove the part where they play Who Would You Do, because Pam would totally say Toby again. And Jim would, in this situation I think, answer truthfully. Ah, I just loved that whole bit.
I always get so excited to see this updated!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 07:13 pm Title: 7:00 AM
I love this piece sooo much. It's natural and sweet and pitch-perfect. *Sigh.*
Date: November 07, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Prologue
So nice to have an update, Wendy. I love this series.
Date: November 07, 2007 06:46 pm Title: 7:00 AM
I feel like the proud aunt who held your hand through the pregnancy and now looks at the beautiful baby in the nursery.
That's one weird-ass simile, but it's the best I've got after a two and a half hour class, I'm afraid. Well done, well done!!!! -GMMBBG
Date: November 07, 2007 06:38 pm Title: 7:00 AM
Oh, jeez, the 'who would you do' comes back to haunt them! ARGH! So close, but yet, so far!
Date: November 07, 2007 06:18 pm Title: 7:00 AM
*Mose at the Dairy Queen drive thru*
Go ahead and order when you're ready, sir.
Thanks. I need the biggest chocolate chip cookie dough Blizzard you've got.
Okay, sir, can I get you anything else?
Nope, that'll do it. Oh, wait...
Yes?
Is there anyway you could gift wrap it?
You want to gift wrap a Blizzard?
Yeah. It's a gift for a friend. She wrote an awesome chapter for her story, and she deserves this.
Uh, I'll have to ask my manager...
Never mind, I'll deliver it myself:
http://www.allesamerika.com/images/dairy-queen-blizzard.jpg
:)
Author's Response:
*smiggle*
That was awesome :) You rock so hard you don't even know it but you do!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 10:31 am Title: 6:00 AM
Wow, this is amazing. This is an alternate universe I'd have loved to see played out. Very good. Very, very, very good. So good. Amazing, even. Wow. keep going - I can't wait for the rest!!!!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:06 pm Title: 6:00 AM
whatever! Pam totally heard what he said! you're gonna come back to that right? i like this chapter a lot! he's gonna tell her!!!
Date: October 31, 2007 12:11 pm Title: 6:00 AM
Oh my gosh, i am in love with this story! I love the idea of Jim telling her that he was transfering and seeing where it goes from there. And I love that he's semi-aware that Pam "has feelings too".
I loved Jim pretending that Pam was his girlfriend. So cute! Oh Jim, how can you break my heart when you're not even real?
Fabulous job! I can't wait for the next installment!
Date: October 31, 2007 10:39 am Title: 6:00 AM
LOVE this fic!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:45 am Title: 6:00 AM
Aww... house hunting with the Mrs.! How adorable is that?
P.S. TELL HER, JIM!!! TELL HER!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:35 am Title: 6:00 AM
More, please... Like now.
Date: October 31, 2007 08:08 am Title: 6:00 AM
Thank god there is still like 15 more hours to this story. I'm going to be so sad when it's over. Unless it ends in a way I might like. IF you know what I mean.
Date: October 31, 2007 07:03 am Title: 6:00 AM
Aww I'm loving this!
I don't know if I want her to have heard or not.. .but I have a sneaky feeling she has. :P It may sound a bit weird that he's calling her his girlfriend, but also so obvious that he likes her. Which could work both ways. :)
Brilliant chapter! Looking forward to an update!
Date: October 31, 2007 06:16 am Title: 6:00 AM
Another triumph! This chapter was just what you needed at this point--a chance for Jim to try and sort out a few things in his mind. Also, I've always said that Sleepy!Pam is the cutest Pam of all the Pams. :)
Also, there's so many wonderful little gems in this chapter, such as "watching my future approach at 75 MPH," or how Jim realizes that his circular thinking now comes with an expiration date.
But I think my favorite moment was when Jim told the cop that Pam was his girlfriend and he thought "damned if it didn't feel good to call her that."
This story has me wondering if it's possible for you to actually write something that's NOT excellent! I'm thinking....no. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 05:58 am Title: 6:00 AM
Eeeee!! Did Pam hear Jim refer to her as his girlfriend?